After i read "Comma", i was deeply moved by the spirit of it and i had to take a look on your other fics. This fic is tremendously brilliant, i am fascinated by the way you can make from a very simple action a romantic and beautiful fic, it's small but i think it captures perfectly the main essene of their love

A happy story...yeay!

Of course I love it; it is so sweet, an everyday slice of life that romantic souls wished they'd experience.

I've read this one a long time ago; I'm just re-reading and thought I'd leave a review.

Musca...

I love, LOVE, your BoringOrdinaryFiles fics. Please post more of them... and write more of them as well.. because I like reading them during days like today, where the sun is too hot for me to lay out by the pool and the afternoon is long and drowsy.

keep it up.

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I Love how you write!!!! so poetic and full of imagery...i particularly love this line: "as if being in love is an incomplete sentence unless it was with each other"...really!!!!!!!! keep writing!!!!

I am just stunned by your ability to spin gold out of words, the same words I have such a horrible command over. It's so uncommon to find fic like this in this fandom, and I feel so lucky to have found yours.

That was absolutely beautiful. You painted the scenery and their actions with breathtaking accuracy and simultaneously left a lot and little to the imagination. Great work. I also love how you pick the post Hogwarts storylines to write about H/Hr. Gorgeous.

It's poetry in prose, really. I haven't read any of your longer work yet, I'm interested to see how you take this powerful ability to capture a moment, and translate it into a plot.

I like this story. I like stories that tell about possible H/Hr life together post-Voldemort. This is so simple and sweet. And I think it touches the longings in the hearts of the rest of us who wish we find the kind of love that H/Hr have in these web pages.

this is really good, i really enjoyed the simplicity, and the subtleness...WOW!

Harry and Harmione in their own little world. Whos cares if anyone else understands...they do. Excellent.

Sorry, me again. When I read your review reply I had to submit a contraction. You didn't seem all too please with the Daniel Steele (or however you spell it) thing. I've actually never read any of her books, I just used the name because I know she's been a best selling Author for eons. Hows Philip Roth? or Virginia Woolfe? (Though VW does tend to bore me a bit because her metaphors never seem to actually stop and breathe.) So how's that? Feel better? I hope so! Now go finish that chapter girlie!! Your fans are awaitin'!

Oh you have got to be kidding me. What's your real name anyway, Daniel Steel perhaps? You shouldn't be writing fan fiction. You should be writing novels!

Your imagery is unbeleivable and your ability to turn a simple moment into a touching and beautiful story can't be beat. If there were a 'best author on portkey' poll I'd probably create a couple dozen fake accounts just so I could vote for you and make sure you won it... though with your writing you'd hardly need a rigged election.

I this. You did such a great job of capturing them in such a casual setting. Write more!

Normally, I never quote such long passages, but I just think that this paragraph needs to be mentioned over and over again:
"Their touch would seem strange to an onlooker, untrained; as if it’s a language they learnt all by themselves. As if they learnt how to be with each other before they learnt how to be in love. Even in the tangle of sheets and skin sliding on skin, their touch is without artifice and artistry. Less the universal language of lovers, more a language all of their own, the detailed grammar of each other, as if being in love is an incomplete sentence unless it was with each other."
How very "Harry and Hermione." It's just them and their world and it doesn't matter if anyone else gets it, as long as they do. How beautiful.

I've been meaning to review this story for some time now as the chapter alert has been sitting in my inbox screaming at me to review. There's certainly a reason you are on my favorites list. Between this, "Braiding" and now "Voiceless," I'm hooked!

"Their touch would seem strange to an onlooker, untrained; as if it’s a language they learnt all by themselves. As if they learnt how to be with each other before they learnt how to be in love. Even in the tangle of sheets and skin sliding on skin, their touch is without artifice and artistry. Less the universal language of lovers, more a language all of their own, the detailed grammar of each other, as if being in love is an incomplete sentence unless it was with each other. "


.... Wow. That was amazing. You have these brilliant paragraphs of insight that just blow me away. Great job on this one, as well as the previous two.