wowowowowowow i love ur storys  u are the bomb i just thought id let u know that |
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/03/06
That was very sweet. I just love Harry's dawning comprehension. He can be so aborably oblivious. Oh well, very nice, as you say, drabble.  |
Author Feedback: Thank you Technically a drabble is 100 words, and a double-drabble is 200. But I can't write anything that short  So this little ficlet is more like a drabble to me than a ficlet. Anyway I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope my writing has improved a lot since I wrote this almost 3 years ago  |
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bradSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 01/03/06
You know, this is very nice ... I found the image of Hermione gently draping a blanket around Harry's shoulders very sensual. A very nice and cuddly paragraph.
Got a question, though - how did Harry lose his clothes in fighting Malfoy?
The big question is, though - exactly where was Harry wearing that one lone sock???? |
Author Feedback: The sock is on Harry's foot
Gee, I wrote this so long ago (in about 10 minutes) that I don't remember how Harry lost his clothes to Malfoy. Actually I don't think he did, and I didn't make that clear. He went to take a shower and got locked out of his dorm. Yes, a big plot hole in a 450-word ficlet |
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bradSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/03/06
Aww, that's nice! But a bit stereotyped, those poor dumb ol' males taking so long to be 'enlightened', and as it is it's still the girls who make the first move. Very nice though. |
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That is absolutely love. I like when Hermione takes matters into her own hands. Quite literally... |
Author Feedback: Thank you I'm glad I found this on my hard drive. |
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PatriciaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/02/06
Very nice short love story! Long life to Harry and his Hermione ^_^!
Regards from Lima, Peru |
Author Feedback: Thank you! |
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MissLexiSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 26/02/06
I'm very sorry to hear about your mother. I also understand how crazy real life can be. Thank you for updating this, because I really do love all your work. I hope your muse finds her way back! Thanks for sharing. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much for commenting. I got my love of words, reading and writing from my mother. Sometimes I feel like her death took all of that away from me  But writing, for me, is like riding a bicycle -- I fall off for awhile, then I have to get back up and get on the darn bike and start riding again. My muse is returning very slowly. Thanks again. |
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Excellent, Anne! 
Hopefully you can add some more tidbits to this.
This was nice to read! |
Author Feedback: Thanks very much. I've got two of your stories (are there more?) on my must-read fics list. Hopefully I'll get to them soon and manage to get some writing done too |
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BingblotSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 26/02/06
Awww... I remember reading this the first time and I loved it then and still love it now. It's such an adorable mental picture!!
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Author Feedback: You have a very good memory Thanks so much. *hugs back* |
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Oh, that's quite good. I really do enjoy second-person point-of-view stories when written properly, and this was one of those rare cases. Very nice. I would argue, though, that Ron's not quite so enlightened of a person as this, but that's a matter of personal opinion rather than cannon fact. In any case, I love this. Great job! |
Author Feedback: Thank you. You're probably right, in canon Ron isn't this enlightened. But hey, that's what fan fiction is for -- to make things right Thanks again. |
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That was a nice fiction.. I liked the Ron and Luna part. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was hoping something like this would happen in HBP or Book 7. Oh well. That's why we have fan fiction. |
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AAWWW!!! That was a really cute fan fiction. I really liked the tree. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. The tree was central to the whole thing. I will shut up now or my reply will be longer than the drabble |
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what a well written Ron POV dribble this is, well done, please do write more like this |
Author Feedback: Thank you! In the back of my mind I've got an idea for a longish ficlet that would be H/Hr, but from Ron's POV. Now I'm convinced I need to write it from his POV and not Harry's or Hermione's. Thanks again. |
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wow, what a nicely written dribble of H/Hr goodness, esp the innundo at the end  |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I'm glad *someone* caught the innuendo |
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Nice drabble, that was.
I do hope Ron will soon have that enlightenment - some kind of revelation.
Nel |
Author Feedback: So do I!! I've never written Ron's POV before, and this was good exercise for another fic (actually H/Hr) that's moldering in the back of my mind Thanks much for reviewing. |
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