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Wow! I liked that Cho was knocked down (no pun intended) a peg by Hermione. She really seems like such an egotistical person. I also really didn't expected that ending. |
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HaskyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/04/05
It's good but you could continue. This essey is written really nice and I think you can do next chapters.
Please try to do continuation |
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OHH!! Way to go hermione!!  That was soo funny!! I loved it!! Oh my gosh I almost couldn't believe the end!! GREAT job!! |
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trutonksSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/04/05
SOOOO - are they married or engaged? I loved the heated writing, let me tell ya, is it a little hot in here or what? |
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CoolcharUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/04/05
Oh I liked it! Haha, good for Cho. I was like  when I read: "What does she know about me and Harry? She may have had a small amount of his attention in fifth year, but I've got all of it now."  Too bad for that guy Cho likes, she's just using him. O wells.. I'm glad for Harry and Hermione! |
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Interesting confrontation and interaction between Hermione and Cho. As you said it was a little bit fluffy at the end... but sounds good anyway! |
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ViwielSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/04/05
*giggles* Pretty nice fluff. Just what I need right now thank you very much.
Hermione telling Cho off, damn straight. You go girl! Those lines were also very tough and good too. Cho is just so typical. The scene in which she goes to her next guy was so well typical of her to do since it clearly shows how desperate she is and in a way, she doesn't really know what love and oppisite sex is. Harry and Hermione seem to have it all. Not just the snogging and sex.
The snogs scenes though, nice...  It's also great to see that they are in a commitment and well, have it all good
Great fic  I liked it very much. |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/04/05
What a great story...love how Hermione held her own with Cho but loved that Harry proved everything beyond a doubt to Cho. The fluffy ending was wonderful! Thanks for such an enjoyable one shot. Put a smile on my face. |
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I like this ficlet alot it's really cute and i like the ending
Aphroditee
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That was really really good. But there's one thing I didn't quite catch. What's the status of Harry and Hermione's relationship? Based on what's in this I'd say they're not married but then I wouldn't mind if they were. Perhaps a prequel to this is in order? ^_^ Great fic! |
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Always fun to see Hermione allowing herslef the pleasure of a little claw-stropping, especially when Cho is the scratching post in question. The rings at the end were a nice touch. It's also nice to see a bit of 'Touch My Woman And Die' Harry tossed in for good measure. If Tommy is ever stupid enough to try that, he won't know what hit him. |
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Brilliant fic! Fluffy, but not overly so, smutty, but not graphic... and then there was the revenge on Cho.... added bonus!! LOL. Good job. Hermione might be a tad OOC but JKR's never really put her in a situation like that with Cho, so who knows? Anyway, good job, keep writing! |
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Amazing!!!  The writing was perfect, the plot was super fluffy and the development of the story went great!!! congratlations!!!  keep up the good work!!! |
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Now I like that! ^_^ Very sweet! Very cute! Most people have Cho as an innocent person kind of thing, but you certaintly did not!  hehehe Nice going! Love the little twist at the end with the rings. |
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/03/05
this was really good! Couln't you write more? Like another chapter or a sequel or do this one from other people's POV's? That'd be great!!!
Love the way you Harry and Hermione acting towards each other, natural!! |
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