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Smashingly brilliant! I'm not sure if Hermione would take this path in the book but it totally fits with her abilities. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/05/06
Its not Delores, you damned idiot! Its Dolores. You make the same mistakes in all your fanfics! Moron. |
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lilbitSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/02/06
The story line is good but I think there should have been a bit more action between Mcgonnagall and Umbridge. I do have to say that McGonnall eating a biscuit after she left was cute. Good Job!! |
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oooooooooooh. Dark ending, I'd imagine, but lively. And I'm all for liveliness. I have you on my other favorites, but I'm going to add you here.
Word up. |
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This is rather perfect alignment actually. All shippers, not just H/Hr shippers imaginr Hermione will join Harry in this pursuit, pre-HBP. And in fact, though not in this manner, she is joining him post-HBP.
Facinating missing moment! |
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No NameUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/09/05
I liked it. I found it confusing at times. But, if I fell out of a boat I wouldn't be able to find the water.  Take Care,
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You've got the characters spot on! It was a good short read, I rather liked it, and hope you write more inbetween the scenes, since you did this one quite well. Too bad McGonagall didn't kick Umbridge's arse. Would you be writing a future fic with that in it? (sorry if you've already done it. I've only read three of your fics!) |
Author Feedback: Actaully this fic could set with either the Lions universe or the circle it is actaully referenced in both  , chapter 8 in circle and somewhere in Lions (i forget) |
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I love it, It was very interesting, really. Now I'm bound to go read HP& the Lions of Griffindor !! I'll gladly read it thought, I've heard quite a lot of aweosme comments about ur fics!
~MidnightSecret~ |
Author Feedback: If you havent read it, you might want to read HP and the Darkness before the Dawn first, it is the first full book in the series. Its rough in a few spots, but it was the first one  |
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zamUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/05/05
Hi! I loved the way Professor McGonagall reacted to all of Dolores's actions. It just seemed not so Dolores though. But I did enjoy reading it. I loved the means in which she sent her letter to Prof. Dumbledore. That was really good. I wish they could do it that way in the real HP (for the really powerful and advanced ones...). |
Author Feedback: It what way, was it not deloras...just curious. Fawkes probably is used as a messenger in the cannon, in fact I thought I remember him being used as such. |
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Excellent insights. I can easily picture the little career meeting with McGonagall playing out exactly as you have described. I think you've portrayed all three in canon perfectly, especially Hermione's determination to be with Harry and try and protect him. I'll have to read your longer fics when I get a chance. Great job. |
Author Feedback: Thanks RK. I actaully wrote this, just because of what you said. I got the idea while listening to Harry's interview in OoTP with McGonagall on CD in the car. And then I extrapolated Hr's almost complusive need to be with Harry and there you go. There are a lot of fics where she is protrayed as wanting to be a healer or a politicion, or something...I actaully think those only work if Harry is not going into being an Auror. Teaching or quiddich being the usual choices. Now that JKR has hinted that teaching won't be harry's future...and I think that there are hints that he is drifting away from quiddich being a central thing in his life.. As Long as he's on the lines, I think she might very well be so too...and the slight fact in this universe, its a REALLY bad idea to cross them when they are together...
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hehehe that was a great look at one of those missing moments that OOTP could have used if it wasn't already so dang long. Good job on making it fit and everything, you really had a disturbing handle on the toad....hejheheh. Kudos! |
Author Feedback: I am thinking of the toad making another reappearance in book 3
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Wow! This is just as good as your other stories! I love your writting!
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Author Feedback: Thanks |
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ascher67Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/04/05
short but sweet, i like it its a good back story to your main book (altho i need to find time to read Darkness before the dawn soon) it fits in nicely with the Lions of Griffindor at least |
Author Feedback: Yeah I wrote it just for that purpose. It was a plot bunny that just came to me one day. |
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not only did I like it, I loved it! I think I'm gonna start reading the lions of gryffindor fic and I really liked this fic! |
Author Feedback: Thanks. If you haven't read it...in chronological order the stories go Career advice (set during year 5, one shot), Harry Potter and the Darkness Before the Dawn (year 6) and Harry Potter and the Lions of Gryffinsdor(year 7) |
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AlorkinSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/03/05
For something you 'just threw together', you did a damn fine job! I loved McGonagall'e explosion. I think every teacher in the school would have loved to hear it! OH, BTW, Umbridge says 'Hem Hem, not Uh Hem" Sorry. ALorkin. |
Author Feedback: Thanks...You may be right aobut the hem hem, vs the uh hem, I'd fix it, but I'd loose the reviews...I just got inspired as I was listening to OoTP on CD in the car. |
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