Really enjoyed this. I literally lost my breath when Harry mentioned babies and then again when hermione asked if it was s proposal - I had assumed they were already married. Love the contrast with the outside noises!

Really enjoyed this. I literally lost my breath when Harry mentioned babies and then again when hermione asked if it was s proposal - I had assumed they were already married. Love the contrast with the outside noises!

I love your prose style with its elegant turns of phrase, and the quiet cadences of your storytelling, and the powerful imagery you conjure. Your masterful command of the language, your writing, is awe-inspiring.

Thank you for sharing. I hope you continue to gift HP fans with your art.

Wow that final phrase was so perfect. I really like your style of writing. I guess I read a few of your stuff before cause I remember your name. I´m going to check your stuff again anyway. I see there is a big chance that I might like the other fics.

Thanks so much for sharing this! I´m adding this one to my favs

so sweet! not as corny as some other proposals I've read.

This story has been in my favorites for awhile now, but I just realized I never left a review. Which is a shame because this is probably my favorite H/Hr one-shot ever written. I love the simplicity of your writing, and you really capture the beauty of the H/Hr connection. I enjoy a lot of your stories!

That was beautiful. I have never read a fic with Harry proposing like that...but this would have to be the best one yet

I love it how you wrote all those stuff they do together are all simple, mundane, every day kind of thing, yet its shows the love they have.

Thank you for writing such a sweet fic!

This story is so very beautiful.
I found it on a list of best H/Hr one-shots on a Portkey thread and I completely agree.
It is so simple and yet there lies its true power. The level of comfort and trust in their relationship, the bit about the books in the beginning, the mismatched hair-bands that Harry puts on the braids that he makes in her hair - all of this was so utterly lovely.
A brilliant job.

I've read this story a long time ago and am re-reading it again. It is so nice, and kinda sexy actually. I remember JKR said that Harry needs Hermione badly, and I'm thinking, you know, for purpose of having babies, he'd definitely need her badly.

The hair thing - I think we have all been bushwhacked by Harry's eleven-year old vocabulary of calling Hermione's hair 'bushy', so we think she does not have beautiful hair.

On the contrary, I have always imagine Hermione to have Shakira hair - you know, the Latin singer, Shakira. She has thick, scrimpy, rock chick hair, very sexy. I imagine Hermione's hair to be like that. And for eleven-year Harry to call such hair 'bushy' is perfectly understandable.

But by Book Six [yeah, that dratted book], he actually described her as having 'a long mane of brown hair.'

So, I think, Hermione has beautiful hair.

oh i completely loved that - it's so them, i can see them not being fussed with some big fake 'romantic' proposal, just something simple and heartfelt. looking forward to reading more of your fics now

I simply ADORE this fanatic fiction, it's so WONDErful and punny and cute! I particularily loved the way in which you ended it, talking about the awful hair thier kids would have, it made me laugh simply because it's so true.

This ficlette has such and simple and honest quality to it and I really feel like it's Harry and Hermione talking!

Great Job!

I absolutely loved this one! I'll be sure to check out your other stories! thank you!
~Hato Atori~

Oh, wow, what a great fic. Sweet in all the right places, serious in others, and the perfect ending. Lovely, lovely thing, this story. Glad I got a chance to read it! Consider me a new fan of yours.

oh that is almost the cutest story i have ever read. 2 tumbs up ^.^

A very sweet story of the everyday ritual of H/Hr. I totally like the part about how their kids are going to have awful hair.

I have never thought of that before.

That was indeed original.