Great! I love the way cho walked out of harry's live, i hate her, i know it sounds rough but i do, i always hoped hermione would ruin their relationship and i think she influenced a bit  Keep on the good work |
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YOU!!!!!!! EVIL!!!!! Just ending it like that! How can you!! It's an insult! Lol, na, I'm joking. It rocked! I loved it. Surprised Cho didn't interfere with them at Hogsmeade. Oh well. Very nicely done anyway.
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luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 24/01/06
*squeals* that was so cute!!! i really wish that could hapen, this would be a perfect part in the book for the beginning of Harry and Hermione getting together. |
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 aaawww that was totally cute sweetness! *sighs* I'm totally spoiling myself for reading all these ficcies of urs today lol |
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I love stories that really do reflect the characters as per JKR books. The stories become more real, more believable. I can hear the words these people would say in my mind in their voices (or rather, in Emma Watson's voice playing Hermione in the HP movies, or Daniel Radcliffe playing Harry, or Rupert Grint being Ron). You have stayed true to the characters. Even Cho was just like the Cho in JKR's book.
It's when authors change the personalities of the characters that sometimes the stories become too contrived, and readers lose interest, because they no longer reflect the Harry, or the Hermione, or the Ron that they have pictured in their heads. You have not fallen into this mishap. It's good. Congratulations. And by the way, I like this story because it's not unnecessarily sappy. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/07/05
Well done, I think you stayed true to the characters and I love the way the dialogue flows. Really a great little story; kudos for writing a sweet story without making it teeth-rotting sweet. |
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coolmanSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/06/05
That was good. Nice to see Harry and Hermione's trust for each other. Dialogues were good. Cho's character was brought out well. |
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I really wasn't expecting a sequal. The first one was just fine with me. but this sequal is very cute and fluffy to the core. hehehe...it's cute. I love how you made them go into Madam Puddifoot's, the first place Harry and Cho went for their date. Very clever.  |
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Awe beautiful. I really like your stories.
They're so full of beautifully writen drama that just brings all your storoies together. Really great job. I can't wait to see what else you have to write!!!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/05/05
aw come on you didnt say how they kissed. was it wet? was there tounge? you gotta write it. other than that i thought it was pretty good. cool fic |
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Oh... whoops! i didn't see that there was a second chapter! *Is dumb*
So... let me continue with a REAL review.
Characterization was most awesome. The whole first chapter with Hermione's musings on the whole Cho thing and her reaction to Pudifoot's were brilliant. Harry's insecurity was very much Harry as well. Great job with that.
The whole story is very cute and very charming. It leaves me with a satisfying *le happy sigh* feeling. And we all need some of those once in awhile! ;D
Great story!
~panda |
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A very interesting play on Hermione's dedication to her friendship with Harry. Very cute and well done!
~panda |
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bradSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/04/05
Very nice/good! A nice slant on what the 'real' (canon) Hermione could have been doing all this time? Hmmmm.
The 'last resort' complication was clever. I realise I could never be a writer when I know I would never think of the little thinks that flesh out a story, make the plot a winding road with little bumps and obstacles along the way.
"You're already there". Very nice. Thanks for the story! |
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HELLO!Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 16/04/05
Well, hi. I'm Melissa. I think that you could have make this fanfic longer, but it's quite good.
I sincerely hope that Hermione and Harry go out together (  ) |
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