Oh my! Really funny! I love the barking part jeje

Very cute. Harry was a little OOC with the song, but i don't see how he could sing and NOT be OOC. I really liked the barking spell...hilarious. I enjoyed.

Its nice and the outline is good to. It has nice context.

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its very, very, very good you would make great seriuos author.

really good i love the joke ron cracked, it was really smart!!! a job well done

Now that was funny! I was laughing so hard it actually hurt.

i love absoluutley funny! i r eally lik e it

"If I eat faster, then the Oompas won't have time to tie my shoe laces together."

That made me burst in to laughter that was just omgosh

I just stumbled upon it and wow I'm so happy I did!

this is a very good story i liked it very much i am waiting for the next chapter

Oh and I agree with Linsey, Ron deserves an award for being just plain funny. He rox!

That was such a funny story! I've read this many times but I kept forgeting to reviewing it. Harry's song was very er.. amussing, yeah that's it. I've read All of your stories, YOU ROX!!

"Hey Luna, watch this," Ron swivelled around in his chair, "Hey Pansy! what's a tree made out of!?"

*BARK*

Ron turned around in his chair, laughing and noticed the stares her was getting from Harry and Hermione.

"What? Might as well make the most of it."


ahahaha that took me like 30 seconds after i read it to get it and then i almost died...so funny. ron deserves some sort of award for that...man oh man

a really good start, i think that this may be your best fiction story

it is a very good story with a great setting, song and plot good on ya mate