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ArchieFan07
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/09/08
Wow! You Are A Genius! I Mean I've Read most of your Stories and well... All I Can Really Say Is You Are Absolutely Great at These Kind of Things...
 

amanda
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/04/06
this story was soooooooooooooooooooooooo totally romantic but i must admit i kinda was wishin it had happened to me ur an awsome writer continue writin stories
 

wafball
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/04/06
I always love your fics, they're so sweet. Just enough to cheer up my day
 

sapph_fire_griffin
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/06
ahh Short sweet and perfect(no pun intended). I love your stories I really do but to be honest they are so sweet they're giving me toothaches. I love that your stories are sweet and fluffy but where's the passion, where's the action(not dirty action)the kinda of action that happens when one of the two it hurt of kidnapped and that causes the other to respond in ways that they didn'y know they could. That is what I'm looking for, but who knows, I nmight find it in some of your other stories.
 

Hammer31
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/12/05
Nice. Short and sweet. 'True bravery is not a physical act, it is trust'
 

MyForeverHarry
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/08/05
Wow, that was weird to have Hermione easily/quickly falling asleep while Harry was beside her.

 

coolman
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/06/05
That was sweet and fluffy. Dialogues were very moving and well written. Wish it was a little longer though. I would have loved to see what happened the next day.
 

Copper
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/04/05
*happy sniffles*

This was lovely and sweet. I love that they were both oblivious and that he was more worried about what 'crossing boundaries' might mean than he has been when it comes to facing Voldemort.

"It was okay that this sleeping girl, so seemingly gentle, could break him beyond repair – because she would give him the same power every time she cried on his shoulder."

This is my favourite line... that both their risks are acknowledged and it's just a perfect line.
 

h&hr4eva
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/03/05
That was so cute I love it! You did a great job on this story and you're now on my Favoutires list! I can't wait for your next story! Keep up the good work!
 

alexiswinn
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/03/05
Oh that is ever so cute. I just adore cheesy fluff, and this was just what I wanted. I love the idea that this is completely plausible, and I love that the idea of a jealous Ron was so easily sidestepped by one comment from him.

This was disgustingly sweet, and definitely worth a re-read. However, I do hope you don't write a sequel. It's a great standalone piece.
 

harryloveshermione2003
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/03/05
AWWWWWW, that was very very sweet! You could've had them kiss though. Maybe a sequel? **grins**
Really great job. Loved their interaction. I just wanted one little measley kiss.
 

Lady Starlight
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/03/05
Ahh... such sweet flush to brighten my day. Sorry that it took awhile to get around to reading this, but it was worth it!
 

Beppo
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/03/05
this is a very great fic.
I am going to read more from you

Beppo Gunnar
Bonn, Germany
 

Psy_Girl
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/03/05
I love it! so sweet and yet so sutil! (sp?)
Great work.
A sweet image of both of them sleeping in bed with their dress robes. And Harry being so sweet to her!
Love it!!
 

Starlight623
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/03/05
I loved that "it had taken a good deal of control to keep him from pummeling the Ravenclaw." That's how I always picture Harry, oblivious to his feelings, yet always protective of Hermione. And the moment between them shared in her room was beautiful. Both finally coming to realize what they had hidden from each other and themselves.

Great work!
 

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