AshUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/12/06
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cute story, but i was wondering who's POV it was in?
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That was cute, sweet, and too the point. It was quite an enjoyable read, if really short. ^_^ Great fic! |
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Awww. See it's fics like this I like. Just extreme closeness with not alot of sap. Just makes me feel all warm inside without over doing it like say Madam Puddifoots (sp). |
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"...managing to pursue the hard working girl..." I assume you meant persuade.
By and large it's a cute little fic...short, but that's ok.
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Nice and concise. To the point, no need to dilly-dally. I love it.
It was obvious it was Dumbledore.
Keep on sharing, and we'll keep on reading... |
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hammergalSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/03/05
Good job capturing the tone of Dumbledore. I like your writing, I think this story could have more to it but it definitely had a good feeling about it. Enjoyed it very much!
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Rather short, but well written. I saw the challange, and I think you did an A-o.k job.. |
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Short but still quite good. Are you planning on continuing this? I sure hope so! It was nice seeing things from Dumbledore's point of view, I love his character too! Please write more, I want to read more of Dumbledore's thoughts on H/Hr! |
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Short And Sweet! I think you got Dunmbledore spot on. Good job! |
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kasmira36Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/03/05
Lovely piece of writing. I love the feeling in this story. I wish it would come true. sob... sob |
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sherylSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/03/05
I think thag this was a great story. you DID, in fact, grasp Dumbeldore's tone, in my opinion. Great work on the story. I enjoyed reading it! Take care and keep it up!! |
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Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in life when you can.
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2buxSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/03/05
nicely done. not to many Dumbledore pov stories. great work. love is blind, indeed. thanks. |
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