sherylSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/05/08
wow...i just loved this!
loved how Harry called Hermione his lifeline and his heart. I think that convo was one of the best that i've read. Well done!
Hahahahaha, Ron and Fang? Very interesting.
Ahh yes, Monty Python. Only the best show EVER! Well, that and Blackadder... and not the Mighty Boosh!
Enjoyed this very much, thanks for it.
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by far the funniest sotry ive ever read! so sweet, so thoughtful, and so hilarious! great work! |
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almah80Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/11/07
Gosh, i absolutely loved this. It made me want to cry. why couldnt this be in cannon?
it was angsty, dramatic, romantic and funny in all the right places.
great job!
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Ohhh it was veryyyy funny the drunk part... but then it was sad... htey hidding, but then again, at least Ron was a decent block... hahaha
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/04/07
great narrtion, really good way of putting it all ...this one is one of my favorites for sure..thanks! |
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bipsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/01/07
There haven't been many good stories around lately ... so i went back and re-read this... just so so beautiful ... makes me cry and smile both at the same time....
have you given up on fanfiction... no stories from you for such a long time... hope you write again  |
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VicklesSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/11/06
I saw the fanart depictoin of this piece and had to take a look. Very cute and just a little bit heart-breaking, just how I love it. The banter was lovely, and I enjoyed the "rolling around in the mud" bit. |
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jacienlSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/11/06
Harry Potter’s heart...what a good Labels
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eowyn83Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/06
I came upon this story late and wanted to let you know you got the mix of sweetness, sadness just right. It just tugs at the heart  I hope you continue to write. |
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that was a fab chapter - loved it, so sweet, and sad, yet hopeful |
Author Feedback: The mix of emotions is what I was aiming for with this one. I'm glad it worked for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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WOW... oh my god, Oh My God, OH MY GOD. That was amazing. you have an amazing gift for writing.
keep it up
-megz- |
Author Feedback: Thank you for the encouragement. This is a special story to me, so I'm particularly happy to hear you liked it. I appreciate the feedback.
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bipsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/05/06
Really interesting story… definitely one of my favs… good work...keep writing |
Author Feedback: I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :-) |
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danielerin, you are my hero. this story is brilliant...you've written one of the best harry/hermione one-shots out there! it's beautiful and the whole story was amazing. great job! |
Author Feedback: Your praise is probably unwarranted, but I'll greedily snatch it up anyway.  It's particularly...meaningful to me in this case, because I wrote this story at a pivotal time in my life. There's all sorts of funny feelings that go along with it. It was written in a couple of days when I was simply replying to someone's request. I didn't think much of it at first, but I do like it now. I'm glad you do, too.
Thanks for taking the time.
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Hey i really love this fic. Love is such an overused word in reviews, but this time i really mean it. I love the simplicity of it and how its much more about feelings than anything "graphic". It really gives a sense of the characters personality. I thought the bit with Ron and Fang was really funny too. Away to read more of your fics now. |
Author Feedback: I am pretty much that kind of writer. I don't have much happening in my stories, but a great exploration of people's feelings and motivations is almost a sure thing.  I guess I'm lazy.
Ron to me is a humorous character. He is the perfect character to use to lighten things up and provide laughter in the midst of some really painful soul-searching. One of the many reasons he was not written or developed to go well with a character like Hermione. IMHO, of course.
Thanks for the feedback. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. |
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babs08Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/02/06
This fic had me cracking up. Really, so far, it's made me laugh more than all your others. But then, it was definitely tinged with that "it's either laugh or cry" quality.
I must sound quite repetetive by now, but I must say again- The *EMOTION* in this fic. Everything about it just sang of truth. It was painted so perfectly, I felt I was right there with them, feeling every stab of pain, and every memory, and every sobbing laugh.
And I had no IDEA that Harry and Hermione were together until you literally gave it away, which made me feel frustrated at the fact that I could be fooled as easily as everyone else. Hmph.
But, again, what you were able to depict between the two of them in just that short scene! It (upcoming cheesiness alert) moved me. "I won’t have you walking around with the label Harry Potter’s fucking lifeline!" This line made my stomach flop in one of those ways that was entirely good. And then everything after that was just- undescribable. Harry Potter's Heart- *closes eyes, beams, and gives happy sigh*
You never dissappoint me, do you? |
Author Feedback: I'm thinking I probably did disappoint with Existing, but as I explained...it was a tough time in my life and I needed to take some therapy out on Hermione.
I am glad you enjoyed Labels, though. I wrote it for someone special and it will always have a special place in my heart because of that fact. It started with only Hagrid's death in my head and turned into an exploration of what it means to be attached to Harry. The whole "labels" theme sort of developed as my fingers did the writing. It was fun.
But my greatest accomplishment with this one (and you caught it) was the combination of emotions. I truly believe that life is this way...you don't give up laughing because pain is visiting. You don't stop living. Things are absurd, and life is a struggle, and your friends (and lovers, in this case) are still there to help get you through. This is especially true in the HP world.
Thank you very much for the review. Thanks for the compliments and for taking the time to read. I am so glad that you enjoyed it.
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