holy mother of all things sacred!!!

you practically had me in tears there!!!

wow

i'm seriously at a loss for words, that was amazing!!

keep up the extraordinary work!!!

Josh

I was a bit confused by this piece--I thought Hermione was mourning Harry but then she wakes up and he's right beside her. And then they talk about Harry's mum and how she's watching over him. Sweet fic, but I'm left more confused than anything.

this is one of the most sadest stories I have heard in my whole life even though im a boy and a girl introuduced this site to me she first told me I would hate it cause its perverted but I dont care she is like the biggest Harry Potter fan i know but whatever I almost cried and I like the way whoever wrote this story the way they write

:::sniffle::: Great story! I loved it!! You are such a talented writer that I would probably read your grocery list adn thinkit was fab too! LOL

Laura

Ah! So it was his mother...

Well that was a little twist. A nice one. Very sweet one You writing amaze me. This was very well-written and sweet...

I'm in a fluffy pumpkin mood now, thanks to this though. Got to find some more hmm...

You really had me going there. Heh. Brilliant story and so sad and sweet. Oh course his mum is always thinking about him. This was as beautifully written as always. I loved it!

You need not worry. Even your "drabble" inspires. I envy the way that you can keep me guessing as to the story characters up until the end. Please, how about a follow-on to Triumvirate?

At the ending it was ironic because I was listening to My Heart Will go On and the last verse of the song played just as I read it. Wierd huh? oh well. I love this fic.

**rubbing chillbumps off my arms** OH man, that was short but trully powerful. God is there anything more pure or beautiful than the love of a mother? Having recently just lost my mom, this one was close to my heart. **tears** Her soul lives in my heart always. And you just had to pick one of my fav songs ever. Great job.

The other reviews were spot on, so what is there more for me to say?
Brilliant as ever? Check.
Successful misleading of readers? Check.
Well fleshed out characters? Check.
Consistency of plot? Check.
Consistent with canon? Check.
I love it? Check.

See? This review is completely unnecessary

VL, once again you have mastered the universe of H/Hr. I can say that I was confused through the whole thing, and when it came to the end I was throughly suprised.

Most excelent job, and in the months that have passed since ToR was finished, you have not lost your touch one bit. You are still an amazing writer, and I will always respect your writing.

Excelent job again. And I hope that maybe you will grace us with some more works soon.

JamesLupinBlack
(Sean)

i really like this, except it ... it just kinda stops. you got it in the rising motion perfectly but then...SPLAT! here's your reciept, there's the oor. another chapter pwese!

that was so beautiful. the writting was great and the emotion behind it was so... thick--in a good way, i cant think of word to describe it better. but it was really great

I read this over at LJ, loved it then, love it now! What a great little story, it's just perfect. But then, your stories always are. Wonderful job!
hammergal

aww. how adorable. short, but cute. i hope you write more fics because I absolutely love your work. you and all of the writers here on portkey are so talented. I have a hard time making stories flow together well, but you are excellent at it. please keep up the great work!! i can't wait to read more of your stories.