"fluffy angst," it describes this perfectly. I'm loving the HHr, but the D/Hr is kind of creeping me out. -shudder- I like it, and I can't wait for the next chapter.  |
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AzusenaSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 25/06/05
OMG!!!! You have got to update you can't just leave it on a cliffhanger like that!!!!! |
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Aw. That's extremely cute. ^_^ I like this story. There are a few errors, but that's to be expected. So, don't worry.  I still love it. ^_^ That's all that matters. Pfft.
~DotD |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 06/06/05
it is a really really good story... i like it alot. please finish it. |
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striderSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 04/06/05
i hope you update this sotry and do not leave it paused for too long it is a really good story! |
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 02/06/05
hello again.. sorry for my outburst in my last review.. Draco and Ginny just pissed me off at the time.. what they did.. well at least they get to screw eachother more by staying together.. the weasley's are next eh.. shall be interesting.. wondering how harry'll react to hermione's last comment.. hmm... interesting.. keep it up! |
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JanieBSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 06/05/05
Bugger. No next chapter yet.
Sorry I haven't reviewed each chapter - I like to just read and not interrupt myself with reviews! 
Now, I know you're good (because I wouldn't be reading and reviewing if you hadn't "pulled me in"!) and I'm not sure if this is constructive criticism as such, but while I DO NOT get a feeling of being "rushed" while reading - it's as though you're writing quickly and leaving stuff out. Not storylines, but just "between the lines" stuff. Hell's bells! That probably makes no sense and I'm sorry - it's like I'm reading the bones of a reallly good story but there's no meat. ::sigh:: Am I still not making sense I wonder? But I have to say I'm enjoying your fics so I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter of this one too!
xxxx Lady Jane xxxx |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 20/04/05
it is really good i have to say i hope you bring
h/hr together soon!!!!!!!!! |
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oh shit! Weasley's? this will be fun! that was a corny line "you're every girl's dream come true" but sweet all the same! |
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striderSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 11/04/05
i'm sorry if you think I've been too tough. I'll try and be less inflammatory becuase I really do enjoy this story. I like stories soometimes that make me yell and scream at it, and the reviews actually give me a place to vent. I guess sometimes I forget that this is your baby and your hard work so you'd probably get offended by someone going after it, especially over someone as worthless as the ferret which ultimately being on portkey is a non-issue. No harm meant it! like I said I really enjoy this story so keep the updates coming quickly!!! Cheers! |
Author Feedback: Oh, no, don't be sorry at all! I enjoy your reviews actually: you point out things nicely and not rudely, using profanity and such. Yes, this is my baby, but I DID ask for constructive criticism, which you gave. I hate it when people ask for reviews and constructive critcism, and then when they get it they treat it like it's a flame. (Although I suppose what a flame is can be interpretive.) I hope you didn't think I was talking about YOU when I replied to an Anonymous reviewer, because I wasn't. (I'd mention who I think it is, but I don't want to be rude or anything.) Anyway, your reivews are great, thanks so much! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 11/04/05
boy when you wrote this i bet you thought you'd never have to play this much defense over the malfoy issue, huh? |
Author Feedback: Tsh, you've got that right. One reviewer in particular has been tough. I'm glad at my self-restraint though. I can have a horrible temper at times. And I think that JKR has only shown one side of Malfoy. No one in her books, except Voldemort, is pure evil, and I think that's what everyone tends to believe. |
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striderSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 11/04/05
well that response was muted. I was expecting/hoping for the ron reaction as you put it. letting this fester wouldnt be good. |
Author Feedback: You'll be seeing a LOT of the "ron reaction" later in the story... hint hint |
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tabitooUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 11/04/05
What Hermione said to Harry was so sweet. I love this story. Can't give it enough praise. Loved the long chapter and hope for many more like it. Please post again as soon as possible. Can't wait to see the Weasley's reaction and when Harry and Hermione get together. That should be really intense.  |
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CainaSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 10/04/05
Hey, nice chapter. I think it's disapparate though, when someone leaves, and apparate when they appear. |
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