Best fan-fic that I've read in a long time, and I would some kind of update on when you make a fan-fic like this while Harry's in his seventh year,ok.

Brilliant, I loved this story. Super harry stories are my favorite. I can't believe I passed this one up my first time spotting this. Great story!

Ryan

Ch.10 - - I must say that I like the idea that Hermione can cause fear and consternation in the twins whereas Molly can’t. I do believe Ginny, or at least a common Ginny in fanfiction can also inspire such trepidation.

Excellent dialogue throughout!

Ch.9 - - Clever, clever, CLEVER! Using the twins legal actions as a cover for the four underaged to become animagi.

Very clever indeed.

Ch.8 - - I like the new training schedule and the lessons. Dumbledore speaks about ‘the well ordered mind’ in relationship with facing death, but I have always thought Harry needed such a mind now.

Strength of will makes very good sense in understanding the power of a wizard or witch.

Great ideas; well written.

Ch.7 - - I like the idea of the twins becoming more a part of the Harry Inner Circle. Nice addition that I have not seen in this form before.

Hermione, the only one to be able to properly soothe Harry – gee, I wonder what that might lead to?

The whole Animagus-to-avoid-Voldie-during-sleep was a great concept. Well done.

I agree with the twins though, will we ever see the effects of Harry pranks on the Dursleys?

Ch.6 - - Amazing and full chapter. Harry’s maturity is on the edge of unbelievable, but you never go over that edge. Nice to see the first hint of H/Hr interest.

Our hero’s ability to control and affect his will during the meeting was well created by you. The way he mollified and cajoled all to his point of view was a delight.

Of course Dumbledore would know ‘Winston.’

Excellent chapter!

Ch.5 - - Clever, clever Harry. (And you by extension.) Not using magic to affect a magical escape and not receive a warning from the Ministry about using magic underage.

Clever indeed.

Ch.4 - - A mild cliffhanger as to how Fred and George will be helping Harry. I guess I am glad I am reading this tale after it is complete, so I do not have to wait.

This is a fine work so far, and I feel like it is on the edge of becoming enthralling.

Ch.3 - - Very believable correspondence between these friends. He is still a teenaged guy, but you have captured a genuine typical letter under the circumstances.

Good work!

Ch.2 - - Fine brief tribute to Winston Churchill, the man who most likely could be said did the most to save western civilization in the twentieth century.

He maybe the most effective motivator in history. Clever to have him bring Harry out of his funk.

Ch.1 - - What a gripping and horrifying start. None of the typical number four, Privet Drive stuff. Right to the most desperate of moments, causing us all to heave a sigh of relief when it proves to be only a dream.

Fine and different start!

Glad you pointed out that you chaged a few thing as I have read the other, but now I can read it again fresh.

Wow, that was excellent. I haven't read a fanfiction with a battle that well written ever! Now I have to read your sequal!

This story definately gave me good bumps haha. There were so many times that I had stopped breathing and ot noticed. The animagus forms were perfect. I just pictured Harry as a midget dragon and couldn't stop laughing. (I'm pretty short myself so no offense to anyone) Well done. Onto the sequal
-Skylar