Now that is lovemaking at it's best. It's nice to read a fic that has an emotional basis rather than just lust. Lust is good every now and then though Great writing, the rain was a nice touch

HEY there! great story! the emotion and the RAIN! my fav. really great keep it up and have a great day!

WOW!!

sorry i dont really know what else to say, that was amasingly written, i mean yeah brilliant piece there.

Making love in the rain ... ooh, erotic!

Very angsty buildup.

That was really good. The image of them in the rain...doing that... It's a wonderful picture. Something very romantic and innocent about it. Great fic!

You are fabulous! You do know that right? This story, like all your others, was fantastic! It was nice to be able to loose myself in your world, even for just a few minutes (work and a show are driving me nuts!) Thank you for sharing.

A wonderful combination of smut and emotional angst. The only suggestions I could possibly give is a little more description on the love scene . . . I wasn't really sure what exactly was going on and when. Was there a point when Harry actually "breaks through" Hermoine's maidenhood? I actually liked that Harry achieved satisfaction and Hermoine didn't. Not because I'm a man, but because it's real. I wanted to have that point made just a little clearer, though. Overall, great work! Keep it up!

this is nice her defence and harry's pressure this is nice well done

aww. how adorable! i'm so glad that they were both virgins. it just seems better and more romantic that way. i don't really know what else to say. i am speechless from the sheer beauty of this story. thank you so much for writing it.

A great story! I really liked it but, damn, I still had chills through the story. Just couldn't picture warm rain in the Scottish Highlands. HA! On to the rest of yours...

i had a great thusday! thank you so much! hope you enjoyed your da as well?

i'm just back from the sinema. watched a movie named "creep" - it was a thriller and i was really thrilled!

just wanted to apologise for calling your daughter "krystten". it wasn't on purporse! i didn't mean to. i accedently interchanged the letters. that happens often, because i'm typing so fast and then i don't care. and i didn't realize it! argh! sometimes it really drives me crazy, because nobody knows what i mean! LOL so just teel your daughter sorry, if she finds out!"

"like the rain" is definitely a total writing make-over for you, but it's great! and it's also different from MLS - but i love that story! it's so much fun reading it! and be sure i'm waiting for the update tomorrow night!

wish you a wonderful day! (i have vacations! yay)

*hugz*

~*~ilka~*~

hey!! that was a good summary!!

never knew you had it in you!!

lol... now on to the story haha... you've outdone yourself yet again Ter, you are truly amazing, i.. i'm at a loss for words... though that might be because i just finished writing three essays... hmm... anyways... Ter, i firmly believe that you can write any kind of story without any worries... well done, keep up the extraordinary work

i look forward to 'parallel' (hint hint)

haha

laterz

Josh

For the first time doing smut on your own, that was really good. I liked it.

Hey there!

I love this story for so many reasons. First of all, for your first actual (posting) attempt at the "smuffy" stuff, it came out beautifully. I know you've got the golden touch when it comes to writing anything, even when you're unsure about it. This is proof enough that it's true...you can write anything and make it beautiful.
I loved the desperation of the story...I think I mentioned that to you earlier. Harry's determination to have her, pleading with her to be his and to give them a chance, to come back to him; it was tearjerking. Hermione's hesitancy was really moving...very sad. Then she opened up and came back to him! I loved that the intimacy was slow-paced. It was very gentle and genuine, and the bit at the end, I loved that Hermione was so accepting and loving about it.

Great story Terri! You NEVER cease to amaze me!
TTYS

P.s. Love the title!
Sara

Nice piece of smut and its nice to see them both virgins and unsure of themselves. Hermione being so withdrawn was understandable, though it was nice that Harry could pull her out.