I am churro the wonderdog, sidekick of Blinky... and I say this was a great story!  It was cool, and I liked the whole Harry being sick. Yeah, well... CHURRO THE WONDERDOG.... BEWARE!!! *smacks into wall* great story! |
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. and you wrote it because you experienced it by yourself? i'm sorry you had to and i also hope, that our boyfriend feels better now! but anyway. as i see it inspired your writing in such a good way! i really liked the story, even if it was short, it was good written!  |
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That was one of the sweetest stories I've read in a long time. I loved that it was just in the middle of what could've been a bigger story and didn't continue on. Some people can't appreciate a good ending. They always feel left hanging for some reason. But I love when a story, like yours, says what it needs to and doesn't drag on for endless chapters. Brilliant! I especially enjoyed Hermione's rambling dialogue...also, I hope your b/f is feeling well now! Phew, I don't usually write this much...
-Casey |
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That was cute, if a bit different than I thought it'd be. *shrug* It was still a good fic. |
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That was great and in using your true feelings made others that have fealt(spelling?) the same to know they are not alone.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in life when you can.
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quizgirlSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/03/05
I'm a little annoyed we didn't learn if Harry got better or not. However, maybe that's just as well if he actually died or something...
Continue writing... |
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DannyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/03/05
Well that was a nice one, hope to read the next chapter soon it was really great on it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/03/05
AWWWW!!! that was cute. Poor Harry! I just hope that your boyfriend's case wasn't as bad as Harry's seemed. If how Hermione was feeling was teh way you felt than i must say, you sound like a pretty strong person!
I loved this story!!! Take care and keep it up!
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EuroSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/03/05
Excellent story. Sweet, cute, simple. Just the way I like them. Great Job. Really, a lovely story. I liked the idea a lot.Poor Harry, but Hermione is always there not matter what. |
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Wow! That was really good! I'm sorry your boyfriend was sick! |
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aaww, I love it! You should really continue this, though I know you mean it as a one shot... |
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DylanUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/03/05
Well, that was.....different.
Aren't you going to cure Harry?
Aren't we going to see a romantic reunion?
I know they said they love each other, but I hardly felt any in this story.
Seems incomplete to me. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/03/05
doing great on this please add new chapter soon because im running out of things to read |
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