Wow that is deep* sniff sniff* this is a very touching story keep writing! * sniff sniff* so sad so sad.

That was a really good but sad fanfic It even maid me cry. So sad.

THAT WAS NO COOOL, WHY DO THE LOT OF YOU HAVE TO GO ON ABOUT ONE OF THEM DYING...it's not romantic, it's just sad...Hermione wouldn't marry someone if she was already in love...

That was really sad, but it was also quite good. The one piece of constructive criticism I would offer is to put your author's notes at the beginning or the end of the fic. They are distracting to the story when they are put amongst the writing. So, even if you adapted a piece of the story from something else, briefly describe what it is and then give it credit at the beginning or end of the page ... but not in the fic. Good shot!

Ok, I hate when one of them dies, and after reading your summary, I wasn't even going to bother with the story, but I'm glad I did.

Well written, and very sad.
Good job.

Wow! That was great! Good job! It stinks that you killed off Harry but I have too, so, uh... Good job?

I'm freaking bawling over here.. Ahh what a great little ficlet.. sad .. so sad.. *starts crying heavily..* Good job.