" Hey Oliver...can I touch the Cup?" ha ha ha silly line but sooooo wrong.. pretty intense writing on the quidditch match.. got my heart pumping.. and nice ending pretty sweet.

hi ,

your series is pretty good but why dont you try longer fics

LMAO! very funny and very well written! i like ron's reaction to the kiss... the quidditch game was very well played out! good job and keep writing!

hehehehe, this one was quite amusing, glad that I chose to read it.

The only complaint that I would have is that it would be the British National Team, not Puddlemere United. (Though, perfectly plausible that Wood and Harry are on it)

I think that you do a Quidditch scene quite well,
I liked it once I read past the fact it was Puddlemere playing for the cup, rather than England's Team.

That was great! Everyone seemed very, very in character! I loved how Ron and Hermione watched and how Krum and Harry played. Especially with that added bit of rivalry *cough, Hermione, cough*

And I especially loved the end! Everyone cheering them on and Ron acting as though it was no big deal. Probably isn't to him anymore. He was more impressed with the Quidditch Cup. Great story, I can't wait to read the others!

Hehe, nice story.. Especially the end... .
But one thing bothered me.. This was the World Cup right..? Then there would be national teams playing not individual teams..? Wouldn't it be England versus Bulgaria, not Pudlemere versus Bulgaria....? Just my thoughts
But other than that, great Quidditch scene...!

Wow. That was a great fic! And the kissing at the end...lmao... that was wonderful. "MVP award"...hehe... Great fic!

haha AWSOME! i love it! you totally rockat writing ction scenes (lucky!) and you always do a great job! i love it!

I LOVE IT THIS IS THE BEST SO COULD YOU WRITE MORE I HAVE READ ALL YOUR STORYS AND THEY ARE THE BEST!

One of the best discribed quidditch scenes in fanfiction. Only one thing wrong, as it's the world cup it should be England or Great Britain and not Puddlemere United. In GOF all the teams in the World Cup are national sides, England lost to Luxembourg (the shame).

Haha.. Great ending. I very much enjoyed the story, as well. It is certainly a different story line.

Your stories just keep getting better and better don't they? I loved 'Proof in the Pumpkin Juice' and 'No One Else' and now after reading this one, I love it too! You really are quite the excellent quidditch match writer. I loved how it ended with the Harry and Hermione moment and as always Ron's clueless and suprised approach to everything. I'll be awaiting our all favourite couple's 'Hogwarts Night' story.

lol, LMAO. that was so hilarious at the end. ron's all 'yeah... whatever... hey, oliver? can i touch the Cup?' lol, that was absolutely great

Oh, man, that was really great - I loved it. I love a good "Harry wins Quidditch and scores with Hermione" story. Well done.