Wow. Pretty impressive that you can create so much emotion in such a short piece. Beautifully written. Simple, but so heartwrenchingly deep at the same time. Beautiful. I liked the imagery of the salty coffee, too.

that'z zad very zad good but zad very zad keep up zhe good work

This is how I hope the 7th book ends.


Then again, I don't because it's just too painful.

Dammit. I just was in happt bean land with Waterloo and I pick this to read, now I need to find some sap. This is really good though and ugh poor Hermione. Harry is not allowed to die, I say so.

Hey that was really good! I think it would be cool to continue the story, maybe a flashback to the night of the battle... if you want to.

ouch...fics like dis hurts...

this was very short and very simple...

yet it's touching...

So bittersweet, so sad. Poor Hermione - the feelings are very well done in this.

awwww that was so sad!! it was sweet, though. i liked the way you used food as the way she was feeling.

"I take a sip of coffee. It's cold and bland. Tasteless. The bitterness is gone. I pile on the sugar. I sip again. There is no sweetness."

i loved that.

great job!!

oooo! that's so sad! interesting style of writing. i like it, 'cept it could use a little more....detail? ionno. srry im stupid. i got a but confused on what was going on at first but after i read it a few times i understood it. good job and keep writing!

ohhhhh... even as simple as the concept was, i got all teary eyed. Oh, i wonder what will happen when i finish the last book, i will be so pathatic! Great job (but than again i love depression [in stories, that is])

A heartrending story. I've had to bury too may friends. Alorkin

Very sad and angsty, nice little one shot though. Look forward to more of your writing.

that was beautiful. exactly how i would have pictured hermione's reaction to the death of harry. great job. keep it up

That was so sad but so beautifully written, it was wonderful!

Ahh... So sad. Poor Hermione... I think I have to cry now...