LaenSigned | Chapter : 37 | Date : 28/07/05
Oh wow... this has been a great chapter! The fight between Harry and the rest of the vampires was amazing, and I'm rather confused as to what Hermione is now that she's no longer human, nor a vampire. So yeah... heh... Ron's a pretty loyal friend huh? Samuel is too talented a wizard... heh... I can't wait to read that happens next. Great chapter, hope the next one is just as great. |
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MoonbabeUnsigned | Chapter : 42 | Date : 18/07/05
OMG!!! This is, I'm thinking, better than Half-Blood Prince. It has been sooo good, I've been tracking it for a long time. You should be an author.I would love to read any books that you wrote!!! |
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HhrReaderSigned | Chapter : 42 | Date : 17/07/05
Very well done. I very much like the future you made. Only critisism I have is the part about Samuel being d's son. Can you remind me where that was discovered at all? I don't remember it, though I've been off the net for a week from portkey, so it's been a bit since I was reading the story. Very well done. |
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Ana SantosUnsigned | Chapter : 42 | Date : 15/07/05
Hi
I just finish reading your fic and I'd loved it!! You are so good when you settled the plot and make the story supperb,I can't hardly wait to read your next story. Please keep going with that fantastic work
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Wonderful ending. I loved the roles that the Potters played in society and the changes that they were putting forth.
Lovely family interaction and having McGonagall's POV made for a great perspective. I especially liked wanting to retire before Marauders Gen. 3.
Lovely story and I'm glad that it finished b/4 HBP. Can't wait 'til my copy comes in the mail tomorrow! |
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ShoiaUnsigned | Chapter : 42 | Date : 15/07/05
 Amazing story! I loved it so much. I'm kinda sad that it's over, but it was awesome. I'll be sure to read your works over again, a while later.  Great job! |
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And thank you also for some of the most wonderful and beautifully written stories I have ever encountered.
I must apologize for only posting now; in truth, I have been following this story and its 'prequel' since around the middle of HP and the Time Turner. I must express my admiration, however, for the way you have been posting updates... it made it easy for me to download a chapter in the morning, read through it during the day (usually sneaking it in during the middle of my working day) or at night, promise myself to post a review... and 'forget' about reviewing because a new chapter has been posted.
(Lame excuse, I know, but hey! At least I'm posting one now.  )
Thank you once again... and am looking forward to more from you.
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eliewSigned | Chapter : 42 | Date : 14/07/05
Ooo... great ending, love how everything was settled. Guess they decide to lie a little for Fleur and her Family sake regarding the real demise of Gabrielle. Love how Ablus finally snuff it, but not without some form of rewards for all his contributions. Guess Hawk should be called Dumbledore now..heehee.
I was intially shock that Hermione was still medically a cripple, but I do think that this somehow work out to be better, kinda make sense. Love the works done by both Potters as well, one to deal with the politics and the other the danger of dark wizards. Hmm..does this means that Harry is actually given special allowances to do what he does, since he may need to kill some times.
Just one thing what happen to Remus' helper, did she survive? Or was she disposed off or turned by Corlyn after she have out lived her usefulness? And I sure like to know the reaction of those who were so used to having house elfs as servants. Switch to humans or still using house elves? Hmm... and did they replace Saldar with Aardus instead? What happen to Saldar then? Thought they would have made a new sword instead. Oh well, answers them if you can, leave them be if you can, either is fine with me.
Great stroy over all, am glad that I decide to read it, will you be writing another after HBP is out? Will be keeping a lookout for your works.
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i loved it!!! you are a very talented writer. i wouldnt have changed a thing. no more "books" in this series? maybe w/ the kids? its a good setup w/ the dragon animagi and all. think about it. good job (again) |
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this was a great story...I am glad to have read it, you did a wonderful job.
Thank you, I can't wait to read anything else you decide to write!! |
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koldudeSigned | Chapter : 42 | Date : 14/07/05
Excellent epilogue. I can see that it was well thought out, because you wrote it from a different point of view than that of the main characters in the story. I am a bit confused about what exactly happened in the previous chapter, because there was some new information that I didn't know, from the battle in Atlantis. All in all, great chapter, and good luck with your next big fic. I already see one, and it has gotten off to a great start! Keep writing!!! P.S. Half Blood Prince; less than 48 hours away!!!!! |
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striderSigned | Chapter : 42 | Date : 14/07/05
near vampyrism and paralysis man i almost think you have it in for little hermione.
great story! |
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eliewSigned | Chapter : 41 | Date : 14/07/05
Poor Gabrielle, blind by beauty and power... Fleur would be so sad... Oh well, she got what she deserve, though a little harsh on a misled youth.
As for Corlyn, he got what he deserve, though I have expected the punishment to be harsher. *Sigh* why is it that the bad guys always seem to get off easy, dying a quick death, whle the good guys or not so bad guys receive worst. B the way, did the demon die? Or just frozen, like her too ambitious minion, waiting to be revive again when some stupid fool pull out the sword. Damn, they shouldn't have sealed the demonic portal yet, then they can sent that hellspawn back to where she belongs, with sword and all still stuck in her... Heehee... since none of the demons seem able to touch the metal, it will serve well as a warning.
Hmm.. how did Dumbledore survive that skullcrushing blow? And please tell be that Hermione's not going to be cripple for life  That will be so sad, for her 'reward' for vanquishing evil and preventing Harry from commiting future mistakes by trying to use the orb for those who rightly deserve it to lose the use of her legs and to be confine to a wheelchair for life. One last thing though, what did Harry do to Aardus? Turn him into another Saldar?
Love what you did to the elves though, this is probably the 2nd fic that I have read in which the elves have been cursed into such an existance. Though I dare say there are going to be quite a lot of unhappy wizards, if their slaves are going to pull the disappearing act on them.. heehee |
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MikeSigned | Chapter : 41 | Date : 14/07/05
Oh man, what a battle! I am worried about Hermione, though, I do not want her crippled for the rest of her life. Although, I'm not sure about her new strength. Great story! |
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Gooooooooood. Its sooooooooooo gooooooooooooood. Yet again another beautifully written chapter by R K Thompson. What are the updates going to be like after HBP comes out? |
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