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I think you made a mistake here- you called Hermione's dad Fred but in a previous chapter (or it was the prequel?) you said he was called George.

That was a good story. I liked it. However, it still is under 'in progress'- why didn't you change it to 'Completed'? A lot of people look for only completed stories in the search tool. And why did you completed it on FFnet? Isn't a little unfair with those readers?

Even though I really loved the chapter I think Harry is wrong.
As meaningless as quidditch may be he made a commitment to the team and as such he should show up.

that was an excellent story, i loved it very much and its prequel congrats

Thanks for a god story, I just come in to this.
And you as a lot of others, do the same error.
Hermione IS almost a year older then Harry.
Less then a month after schoolstart Hermione have birthday. And hens she is 17 in her 6-th year.
You write in this:
((“For the last time, Harry, I'm perfectly fine. And put that wand down. Neither of us is seventeen yet. ))
And in this time Hermione is 17+

A wonderful story, I greatly enjoyed reading it. The whole plot line was fantastic, it was acually like reading the seventh Harry Potter book!

I loved this story and the last. Complete works of art.

Impresive fic mate! Really loved the ending. Or is it the ending. Sequel please Sequel!!! REALLY REALLY LOVE IT

Great fick!!!! Bravo!! You are by far the one of the most talented authors whose fick I've read. I'm amazed really! Please write a sequel to it. WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE

Awwwww such a cute ending!!! I loved how Hermione and Harry got married, and they had two kids... heh... this entire fic has been a great success. I hope you write another one soon. Keep up the work!

I can't believe Snape and Dumbledore are dead. But this chapter was really great. Hope Hermione's injury heals... and you haven't answered what the heck Hermione is now... I mean... the 'king' of vampires is dead... should her powers or whatever be gone now? Anyways, I'm just going to go on to the next chapter and find out... another chapter well written!

Oh wow. What a genius!! Getting Dobby to open the portal like that, brilliant! It's horrible that the vampires have already found Atlantis, and wow... from your description, Remus sounds like a mini-giant. LoL... anyways, I'm off to read the next chapter... can't wait to read what happens with the whole gang... the battle between the vampires and wizards/witches is going to be great... oh yeah, last part about Snape taging along just to see if his students learned anything at all... BRILLIANT!

Haha... Hermione and Harry studying like crazy for the exams... plus loads of other pressures and crap on their shoulders... not that surprizing... can't believe the vampires are kidnapping all these wizards and witches to do their bidding... I hope Harry and Hermione figure things out soon. Ron acting serious is rather amusing to read... this chapter was really well written. Keep up the great work!

Awww... that was such a cute chapter. I loved that Hermione's finally come out of her cage. Luna was absolutely brilliant... and it was pretty messed up that the elf attacked the Lovegoods like that... Lee Jordan's an idiot... not bothering to check if Ginny had a boyfriend or not before openingly admiring her like that lol... but yeah, amazingly great chapter. I'm off to read the next one now