AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 03/08/05
I can't believe that you plagerized The Subtle Knife. However, I believe you should continue with this story as it is not exactly like The Subtle Knife. It is turing out to be very good so far. |
Author Feedback: I have not plagerized it any more than a normal Harry Potter fanfiction writer does and I gave a warning at the top of the first chapter... though maybe I should be more careful? You do not want them to visit Lyra's mum then?
I am glad you liked it... =)
quizgirl |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 02/08/05
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 13/07/05
OH MY GOD PLEASE POST PLEASE PLEASE WAITING LIKE THIS I HATE IT  BUT MAN I HOPE YOU DONT MAKE US WAIT LIKE THIS BETWEEN EVERY POST..I WOULD DIE
GREAT JOB
XOX ANG |
Author Feedback: I am really sorry. I've been away for some weeks and I am trying to finish my other story... that, and I have a huge writer's block for some reason. Maybe you could help me write it?
It's a little late here now, but I promise I'll write some more tomorrow. Thanks for reminding me.
Thanks for reading my story.
Cheers,
quizgirl |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 07/07/05
Wow, I want to read more  I'm hooked I can't wait to see the end
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/07/05
 You need to wrigt some more, I would like to see fall in love with Cho .  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 22/06/05
I normaly don't read Ron Luna Fanfictions... but i saw this and couldnt resist! Im very much enjoying it! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE up-date soon!! |
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EschivaSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 21/06/05
awesome chap! i like the suspence and the whole other-worldly thing |
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Wow, this story just got a lot weirder. So, I assume Harry and co. are on their way through the Whomping Willow (makes more sense if you're trying to sneak out) so will meet up with these three.... maybe.
At least the story title is now explained. I liked the description of Ron's reaction to the knife. |
Author Feedback: Weird in a good or in a bad way?
I know it's confusing now, but it'll make sense after some more chapters... or so I hope anyway. Thanks for reading/reviewing, it's always appreciated.
quizgirl |
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MissHaileeUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 18/06/05
Lol. Forgive me if this doesn't make sense, but I'm realllyyyy tired right now. I've read His Dark Materials, and loffed the book, and I'm glad you found ways to connect the two. Keep on writing. *nods*
I need sleep now. *falls out of chair* |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 17/06/05
At last! What a great chapter! And how stupid of me not to have seen it. Luna Lyra's daughter! So she's dead, and Will won't see her again - but wait, he can go to the land of the dead, can't he? And Specters = Dementors! Great idea. But I'm quite sure it'd daemons, not deamons. (What a nit-picking thing in a great story!) Keep it up and let's have the next piece ASAP! |
Author Feedback: Thanks! It took me a while to figure that out. Even though HP and HDM have a lot in common it's still difficult to get them to fit. And, lol, about dæmons - somehow when I uploaded the chapter it wouldn't take the normal "æ," so I had to go back and change it. I didn't think too much about it since I wanted to get it up quickly, but obviously I should've looked more closely.
As for the Land of the Dead... you'll just have to wait and see about that one.  I'll update as soon as I can, but I need to update my other story first. Thanks again!
quizgirl |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 15/06/05
Why on earth should you be afraid of flames? Perhaps because you are leaving the cliffhanger still hanging, which is a mean thing to do, of course, but you are the author after all. Interesting portrayal of Fudge here, I hope he gets what he deserves, sooner or later. Do hury up with the next piece, and PLEASE return to Luna and Ron! |
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You are doing a good job, though I am not sure if that scene with McGonagall was necessary. |
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I would like to see more, its quite the different R/L fic. Hopefully Harry, Hermione, and Ginny can at least help them escape. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 14/06/05
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EschivaSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 29/05/05
nice cliff hanger! this story is continuing to get even better. keep writing and update soon! |
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how dare you!! 
hee. 
it's really cool. keep going. 
