LuciferSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/03/05
Great! Dumbledore is really amazing! How could he know what the Head Boy and Girl like and put them all in their rooms? He never miss a trick, doesn't he?Sadly, why didn't Dumbledore put some best brooms in the Head Boy's room? I'm conviced that he would be happier by that...
This chapter has said about many missing from the students and lots of new students are in Slytherin. What do you mean? Please tell us.
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lauren_sSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/03/05
that was a great chapter. i can't wait for the next one |
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of course he's going to find that one love of his life - just like his parents! he actually had found it, but didn't realize it yet. am i right or am i right? anyways - wonderful story! i'm just hoping that it's not going to break my heart ...  you never know what'll happen - but i'm sure whatever you write - i'm gonna like it!  |
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quite a nice start - are you going to fill in the background about the missing students? ore is there another work that I should read to learn about them?? - minor quibble - don't let your spellchecker lead you into errors - mourning and morning are quite different.
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Author Feedback: Why thank you! There's no story for missing students. It's just kind of filler info. What drives Harry's emotions. They are either one of three things 1) Dead, like Cho is ( I think there's only 2 students in Harry's year dead so far) 2)Scared to come to school 3) Mourning the loss of families. Sorry, I should have worded it better. They're not missing at all.
And gaah! Sorry about the typo! I was in a rush to get this out, and completely breezed over some things.  |
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Good, real good. I can't wait for you to continue this. Get more out. And you know, part of me wants to kill you because you're killing Hermione, but it made the movie so much more wonderful. That and I'm not a fan of Nicole Kidman. However, Hermione I am a fan of, so if she is going to die, you better live him something... |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! Yes, I don't think Hermione would leave Harry COMPLETELY alone  You'll just have to keep reading to see... lol |
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LuciferSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/03/05
HAHA~~ Hermione must be very happy then. She kissed Harry! She KISSED Harry! That's really great. By the way, is Hermione going to die in the battle of Lord Voldemort? I got the guess in the first two paragraphs. I want Harry to be happy, an I want Hermione to be there with him! Oh, poor Harry! Anyway, that's your story. Only you have the say. But please, if Hermione needs to die, please let Harry at least get a child from Hermione or something, like a necklace or an engagement ring...
Please continue and update soon! |
Author Feedback: Hey! Thanks so much for the review! Things will be moving faster as the story progresses, and I don't think Hermione would leave him alone without ANY condolences. |
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you know, that has got to be one of my favorite lines of the entire movie. I love "nature boy" and I'd think that would work well in this case. That and the vice-ridden gnome line rock. Now, the reason I saw this movie was for my girlfriend, but hell, I'm a romantic at heart. Keep writing and get to work. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I love that movie. It made me cry. lol But thanks so much! I will! These reviews really mean a lot  |
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Your writing style is wonderful! I just noticed that I won't be able to read any more. This is a great piece, and I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.. Again, great job! |
Author Feedback: Why thank you you! I didn't even know I had a writing style But yes, the next chapter (which is already written) will be up tommorow afternoon-ish. Thanks again for the review! It really means a lot! <3 <3 |
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KatakaliSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/03/05
Pretty good indeed. Let´s see where this takes us in the long road to repressed love and sexual tension, right?.  |
Author Feedback: Haha, wow. You're good I'm working on the third chapter right now, and you seem to know just where it's going. Or at least where I want it to go. But again, thanks so much! Reviews really mean a lot <3 <3 |
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OMG! *squeals*
This looks sooooooo good! Hurry and update! Wicked! I think this will be a great story!
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Author Feedback: haha, I'm glad you like it. The second chapters already written, but I want to try and space them out a little It should be up tommorow afternoon-ish. But thanks so much for the review! It really means a lot! <3 <3 |
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KcluvsMlSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/03/05
This is good so far! Please update soon! I loved it |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I already have the second chapter written, but I'm trying to space them out, so people can get a chance to read the first chapter first. Thanks so much for your review though, it really means a lot! <3 <3 |
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