Awww, that was such a sad fan fiction. She died so slowly, and she lost her dream. And nobody else ever knew about their love. ):
That was a fantastic fan fiction, and you are an amazing writer. Hopefully you'll continue to write amazing fan fictions like this one.
If you have time, please read and review my story. I'm new to portkey and would love feedback from an amazing writer like yourself. Thanks. :]

good job! it was so touching! so fluffy! and believe it or not, it made me cry! i could feel the pain they were feeling... i loved it... super

I hate sad endings. For Hermione to give up her life and her future to make sure that Harry survives is like the ultimate sacrifice. Love like that shouldn't die.

wow. i loved it. Thats all i can say really...beautiful. Just beautiful

sob ... thanks alot... i have to clean my keyboard now.... i cried man that was soo sad but in the end it was kinda happy i guess... sniffle sniffle.... goood work keep it up.... enjoyed reading this.... got to go clean my keyboard now .....
hannah

omg! that was the saddest fanfic i have ever read! :'( actually crying ! it wa so moving u are a great writer!

o my lord o my lord that is the first time ever i have cried in a story. You are a fantabulous writer i can't stress anouhg hoe utterly wonderfabulouslyfantasticalsupercalafrachalisticexpealisdocious this is. It Made me cry.

Two things: one, you need to put this under romance/angst, not just romance. Two, you need to say up front that the story involves character death.

I know a lot of people enjoy reading sad, weepy fics with tragic endings, but some of us have enough trouble dealing with depression without reading works that aggravate it. I spend time at Portkey to feel less suicidal, not more. Please, warn your readers in advance.

Very sad. I didn't realise it included Hermione being dead - I don't usually read such fics (I'm too much of an "up" person to get into "down" fics) but nevertheless this was beautifully written and expressed.
xxxx Lady Jane xxxx

tht was soo sad
i was crying at the end
i hope you no that it takes a very good writer to make me cry and you are brilliant
cant wait for more of your brill fanfics
keep up the gr8 work
michelle
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Very sweet and very sad. I always like the idea of them keeping their relationship a secret - don't know why. But you certainly made it work here. Nice job.