YAY! I love it...It was so good! Short and sweet...Can't beat it...love the movie choice too  You gotta love Brad Pitt! Excellent job on the story! |
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QueequeggSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/03/05
who would have thought that a combination of 'Fight Club' and HP could have been so deliciously wonderful! I loved it, it was very hot without ever actually doing anything. And it has my new fav line: "I am Jack’s raging erection." hahahahha SOOOOOO perfect! |
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Oh come on, you can't end it there! You have to go further! The story was so full of sexual tension, you just can't leave us poor readers hanging! Anyways, great job, I really did enjoy it (*mumbling* would enjoy it more if there was sex*).
Thanks, Shayna |
Author Feedback: the main thread I seem to be getting is people want to see them have sex.... To be read "in bed" is the full story, give it a gander if you're bored. I only have the first chapter up so far |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/03/05
That was funny, I really liked it. "That was the last of it". IT's great. |
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LMAO! That was great. Though I must admit I don't generally enjoy post-Hogwarts fics. And I've never really cared for fight club. If I want to see guys beating each other up I'll watch Lionheart or Blood Sport. ^_^ Great fic! |
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EponaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/03/05
Gak! Dammit! Where's the rest of it, dude?! *cries*
lol, That was great. ^_^
Epona |
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kid_018Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/03/05
wow that was some story!! i love their lines! lol! the pacing of the story is consistent.. but damned you! you left the story open!  you big meany...  anyway i think we deserve a sequel.. evil teaser..  |
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HdawneSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/03/05
Evil Teaser Fairy! Down with you!!! How dare you post a chapter like that and LEAVE it hanging there?! Yep, you're evil. LOL! I seriously think you have to post a 2nd or 3rd chapter to this. Damn, I'm craving cake batter. Where's the Duncan Hines or Pilsbury?!!!!! |
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MikoMionySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/03/05
I love fight club too. And the interaction between Harry and Hermione was excellant. I always love the stories where they tease each other. You should defiantly write the whole story for this. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/03/05
Damn, that was hot! I hate the cliffhanger!
Seriously, I'm dying for a conclusion here... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/03/05
Damn, that was hot! I hate the cliffhanger!
Seriously, I'm dying for a conclusion here... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/03/05
not quite sure about this one.
its a good story still but just i bit more added to the end to finalise things. |
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kiwibeeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/03/05
Very sexy. The whole story is definitely worth posting. This piece was bloody brilliant. |
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I think that was a great story.. I have to ask are you going to write a 2nd part maybe.. i ask becouse you kinda left it open for one.
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Author Feedback: I got enough reviews for this to encourage me to post the whole story soon. keep and eye out, it'll pop up in the next week or so. |
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How sweet! Never seen fight club so I got abit lost in the discussion there 
but.. heh, the story whas so nice that I didn't think that much of it...! 