that was really good...and really funny too
its too bad that its your only H/Hr storie... I hope youll write more

Lol, okay, that was a very cool fluff. I loved the way that you made it in the end. It was sort of an edge, but it also makes you smile. That's some work of a very talented author. So, keep up the wonderful work, and I can't wait to here more about it. I give this an eight.

LOL you gotta love it when hermione plays the suductive act lol that was very good and quite amusing

That was funny. Definitely funny. Kinda feels unresolved though, just a little bit. What happens after the cake is done? Oh man, I shouldn't be talking about cake, I'm starving. So anyway, yeah, good story, could use a little more, but I liked the way you did it. Although it didn't strike me as an homage so much as an advertisement for Fight Club. Not a bad thing, per se, but that's how it felt to me. Nice story.

MMMMMMM..... I think I'm in the mood for some chocolate now. I'd prefer chocolate covered Harry, but something tells me that dish is off the market.
The amount of sexual tension is fantastic. And you manuevered it all excellently. Wonder if they had as much fun with the frosting as they did with the batter?!?!?!
Great job!

hahaha! I loved the ending. it was so funny! " that was the last of it. and she sounded regretful" It was wonderful!

Oh, that was really good. There should be more. But it's really funny and to add more may take away from it. Nevermind. This is great!

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gah that was it.. i wish you wrote more... i really do.. but that that was a great ending.. loved that last line "She almost sounded regretful." what a perfect fit

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That is sooooo not fair!!!!!
But I must admit it was a bloody brilliant tease, though, both innocent and erotic; and a bloody good read!
Well done!
rating - 10

YAY! I love it...It was so good! Short and sweet...Can't beat it...love the movie choice too You gotta love Brad Pitt! Excellent job on the story!

How sweet! Never seen fight club so I got abit lost in the discussion there but.. heh, the story whas so nice that I didn't think that much of it...!