PDragonSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/03/05
Okay, that was very sweet, and just about made me cry. Wonderful little story! |
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hernndzzzSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/03/05
You broke my heart...this story was absolutely wonderful. Sad but beautiful at the same time. |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/03/05
Oh that was sweet and so sad.  But I loved Hermione's line about her being his guardian angel. That just about broke my heart. Thanks for such a great one-shot. |
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hammergalSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/03/05
Aww..that was so poignant. I'm glad it had a happy ending even though Harry and Hermione had such a sad burden to bear. Hopefully their new son will help heal their hearts. This would have made a great long story, although the angst would have been tremendous! I liked it a lot.
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J&M Ink.Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/03/05
Wow. That's really good, and really original. How did you think of that? It's beautiful, really well written. I can not *wait* to read some of your other stories! |
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adrealSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/03/05
very bittersweet, but still it was a nice story, had some fluff, alot of agnst but still good and well written |
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Oh goodness
how very depressing
and so sad
I'm sure Lillian and her grandparents are looking down from heaven with heavy hearts |
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Wow. That was angsty and sweet and thank god it had a happy ending. Death of a child!  I do think it would affect Harry like that. Luckily for him, Hermione is very strong, very special, and loves him a lot. Great job. |
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The end had me in tears...at first I wasn't sure if Hermione had died and he was just seeing a vision every year.. or what was going on... but it was painful and believable. I couldn't help thinking of the movies Sweet Home Alabama and Minority Report though while reading it. (Child dies, parents separate, get back together later) |
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AlorkinUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/03/05
I know how hard this is for Harry. I had to bury my wife and our unborn son. Alorkin |
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Dark and painful, but with hope at the end. Very nice work, indeed. |
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DylanUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/03/05
 Wow.
That was good. Well written, and SO sad.
I'm so glad H/Hr got back together, even though struggling through a tragic event. |
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That was wonderful. I got chills reading it. You did a beautiful job. And I think you characterized Harry and Hermione perfectly. I can see Harry running away from that situation and beating himself up for causing pain to people he loved ... brilliant! |
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