This story is very nice. I enjoyed so much.
Thank you for writing. Please write more!

LOL ohh how cute and inocent and ell i so loved the closing line lol

That was a lovely little flight from reality, or unreality, whichever. Or both. I like a positive little fic every now and then, though I must say, I'm a bit of an angst-whore.

to be honest, and I will be, it was nothing special. I felt like I was reading a cut and pasted story, with all the quotes from other "Harry tells Hermione the prophecy". It was a bit dramtic, which usually is a good thing, but something about how you wrote it made it seem awkward. I can see that you have some writing skill, but picking to write such an overdone story was probably not such a good move.

to be honest, and I will be, it was nothing special. I felt like I was reading a cut and pasted story, with all the quotes from other "Harry tells Hermione the prophecy". It was a bit dramtic, which usually is a good thing, but something about how you wrote it made it seem awkward. I can see that you have some writing skill, but picking to write such an overdone story was probably not such a good move.

interesting topic, Henry the eighth. Two of my family line were Ann Bolynn and Catherine Howard. Now, on to the show. OK. It's a bit OOC for Hermione, but within reason. I'm rather surprised Harry didn't try to get the Playwiz back. I was young once. (many thousands of years ago) Hermione would likely have surrendered it after a short fight. I loved the ending. Of course, stunning Dursley likely would have gotten Harry in trouble with the Ministry, but what the hey. Alorkin

A very sweet and fluffy and also funny story... I only think the end is a bit ooc
but that wouldn't show if the story wasn't so absolute believable until the last lines
I really liked it
Thanks for posting
Lie

oh... and have fun with your homework ... sadly I'm more Ron-ish when it comes to (home)work ...

LOL! This chapter was wickedly funny! I can't wait for the next update!

LOL! This chapter was wickedly funny! I can't wait for the next update!

LOL! This chapter was wickedly funny! I can't wait for the next update!

That was sweet! *cheers* Nice present, Ron! Are you going to make a sequel to it? Tell us how it turned out? Had hopes anyway!

More! More!
What happens to the PlayWizard magazine?
What animal died up Vernon's pooper?
How much does Harry actually know about female anatomy?

The end bit was cute. Very clever. I liked the fic; it was fluffy.

Harry's escapism was understandable and I'm glad that Hermione was able to break through it. I found his daydreams amusing and Ron's gift hilarious.
The end was a bit odd, I'm sure the Order is having a fit tracking him down.