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Lady Starlight

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/02/05

Nice story, I especially liked how Hermione knew that he needed her. Ron directing the prefects and members of the DA was a nice touch, I liked how you worked in all of the Trio and gave them all important roles. It was nice to see Neville get revenge on Bellatrix. Involving the House Elves was a very good idea as they have powerful magic of their own.
The conclusion with Hermione and the Centaurs was nicely done. Look forward to more of your writings.

Author Feedback: Thanks for all your reviews, really. For me, Harry and Hermione do have a deep connection, right form the start and it grew year after year. Well Ron and his chess pieces... I'm pretty sure that'll be his role until the end.

Neville's revenge... I wanted him to do an Unforgivable Curse, but I think that's beneath him.

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Magical Me

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/02/05

"craters in the Hogwarts walls can be found" i think it should be caould instead of can because it changes tenses.
otherwise, great job! i really like it

Author Feedback: Sorry about that error.

Something that me and my beta overlooked. Next time I'll be more careful.
Thank you for letting me know that you like this one.

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Muirnin

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/02/05

I loved this story as I was betaing it for you and I still enjoyed it...

I'll get your next chapter back to you later tonight... I got caught up in stuff again... Like computer problems... but it's all good now (*knocks wood*)

Take care and I will be sending to you tonight...

As Always,
Muirnin

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Remus`sweetie

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/02/05

Finish? What do you finish? There is NO finish to Harry Potter!

Very good! I could imagine every aspect of which you described! Keep writting and I will keep reading! ~Kelsey

Author Feedback: Okay, sorry that I ended this one.

Be rest assured there's another one in the works.

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