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Harry Potter and the Final Moon

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aditivats
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/08
I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u
 

BlackFoxx101
Unsigned | Chapter : 36 | Date : 02/11/07
this has to be my ALL TIME favorite story on Portkey! i had actually read this about 2 years ago, but at that time i didn't have an account, so i'm reviewing now, 2 years later. but seriously, i absolutely LOVE this story it's hilarious, i personally don't like all new stories 'cuz they're all really serious and having to do with the last book, so i love this one, awesome job!
 

manitilde
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 28/10/07
uh, what the heck is up with Snape? that's just ...odd.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/09/07
definite hints of a relation to harry here! red hair, dead parents. hope im right, tho an OC/harry fic wouldnt go amiss
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 36 | Date : 18/07/07
the story line had it\'s ups and it\'s downs, but all in all, ithink I really liked it and i can\'t wait to read angel kiss and don\'t forget to floss. i expect they should be awsome too.one confusing thing: aren\'t neville\'s parents dead?
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/06/07
Z0mg u sux H/HG is gh3y! Y0u suX balls bitch!

U sux b4lls!!!!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 27/04/07
Yep, definetly Harry's sister. She looked like lilly didn't she when mrs weasley didn't finish the sentence?
 

Anna Potter(seriously, that's my last name!)
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/04/07
Is she like harry's sister or something?? They both had thier parents die in england at a young age. It could be?
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 19/04/07
I was amused/horrified by Snape's apron. I must admit I'm rather intrigued, but everyone was incredibly OOC. Are they supposed to be?
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 16/03/07
Ok, i had to write something before i went mad. I only got to chapter four but i could not continue. There are so many problems with your story. The charactors are just too ooc. Snape in an apron singing??? Mouldyshorts twirling and planning a dance?!?!?! Hagrid suddenly aging over 2 years?! Dumbledoor feeble?? Harry's letter and hermiones airheadedness. it is just all so so wrong. They all speak as if they are american when they are supposed to be british.. Dumbledoor would have sorted nellie with the hat, as with any new student. They need to tell which house she goes in by her charactoristics, not which table has empty seats - they can use magic to extend the table! I'm sure there are many,many others who would like to read your story but for me its just too Out of charactor and unbelievable.
 

Lovely.Beat.For.Life
Signed | Chapter : 21 | Date : 31/01/07
i love your story.how you made ron a werewolf and how he found leila and they fell in love it's really sweet!
 

Lovely.Beat.For.Life
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/01/07
Really good story i really love it. no i adore it. can't wait for more
 

Shelb n Ami
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/06
Hermione: Theres something i have to tell you.

Harry: What ?

Harry: Theres something i have to tell you too...

Hermione: What you first.

Harry: i think

Harry: im falling in love with..

Harry: you.

Hermione: me ?

Hermione: oh well thats good

Harry: it is ?

Hermione: yes i think ive fell in love with you...

Harry:

Hermione: I you

Harry: But you ron and i ginny.

Hermione: But u said u me !

Harry: i do i just need time to fink .

Hermione: ok thats fine... i'm going to see ron and tell him its over and i hate him...

Harry: me to

Hermione: U RON TOO ??

harry: NO 'laughs' i love you !

Hermione: bye x
 

Mikee
Unsigned | Chapter : 36 | Date : 25/05/06
Amazing! This is my first time to read this kind of Fanfiction..
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/05/06
I really dont know what to say except it was fantastic!
 

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