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I love it. One of the best fics I'e ever read. the fact that it's angst only serves to make me love it more. I love angst. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/02/05
Beautiful poem, haunting tale.
Sometimes, somethings just don't make as much sense as they seem. |
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FaithSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/02/05
Such a beautifully-written story accompanied by a wonderful poem...great job! I look forward to your next piece  |
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so sad and yet slightly romantic. its very good even though it is depressing. 2 thumbs up yo  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/02/05
that was depressingly beautiful and poignant and eloquent. the poem was perfect. |
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omg that made me cry wow that was well written and so sad im still crying woww |
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Author Feedback: yes, she died. I was hoping that people would get that, I didn't want to do a part about Ginny's family finding the body, I thought the bloodied owl and letter would be enough. |
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rembrandtSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/02/05
Oh my goodness, that was so sad, so tragic.
I think I need a moment after that...
Wow, that was so well done; I don't know how you could kill off our two leads...I'd never have the courage to do it.
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Author Feedback: it kinda sucks that this is the piece that I'm proudest of, and it's the least read according to the contro panel. thanks for taking the time. I have another dark D/G piece that I posted on my yahoo group if you feel like taking a look, it's here: http://groups.yahoo.com/adultconf?dest=%2Fgroup%2Fvinofaerie%2F |
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divSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/02/05
*s* That was so sad. It tears at your heart. It was nicely written. A great job on the little information here and there. It doesn't go on forever. More great writing. |
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AAAAAAEEEEEIIIIIIIIII, this is just bloody great. i'm sitting in my school's computer lab & i'm crying. this is so fantasticly romeo and juliet. i let out a huge gasp when i read "the next day lucius discovered . . ." i am utterly depressed. but, it was an excellent story. at least they can be together now, if death for wizards is not the end, like dumbledore said.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/02/05
Great. Nice idea, VERY well developed, and very correct with the characters. Though it is strange of Pansy to think of Draco as her brother. Nice touches of humor (pansy's dress), but it is a bit confusing in the beginning. |
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H_HrFanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/02/05
Very touching actually. I like the poem quite a lot. It's not often I feel sorry for Draco but here I do.
Great job!
Take care,
H_HrFan |
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I enjoyed this fic. I found Pansy and Draco's sex scene a little humorous but very well tied in. please do other story soon. We need more dark writers. |
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