Well, I'm not really in for stories that are based on the plot of movies, but yours is different. It just catches the reader's attention effortlessly.

Good work on the beginning. You gave away enough to hold our interest and keep us begging for more, yet kept more of it back. I can't wait to read more.

Sauron of Mordor

OMG! I love that movie! So, I'm sure I will love this story! Hurry and update!

Ordinarily I don't fancy reading fics based off movies I've already seen since 9 times out of 10 the plot pretty much mirrors the one in the movie and it just defeats the purpose to me in reading them if I already know how it's going to go. So saying that, I'm glad you posted what you did in your author's notes, because I don't think I've come across any H/Hr fics based off this unique movie. I think your plot definitely promises to be a good one to read.

Great chapter, i love the move 50 First Date, please hurry up with the next chapter, and keep up the good work!!!

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in life when you can.