i love jesse mccartney! hes an awesome singer and actor. im glad someone on here is privy to the excellence that is JMAC

great ch apter .. is there more to o it ?? well if there isnt there should be

excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent.

excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent excellent

damn bitch ass whore you don't know how to write a story if it hit you on the head

kool.... maybe, confusing and a little short... yea..... ok a a a a a aa a a a

ooh i do hope you countue to write this story. This story has a lot of potential. Not much plot yet. but its getting there. Good job so far though. il be looking forward to new chapters of this story.

very good. I was just wondering when we r going to hear more? cant wait!! lol

This story is moving very fast but i still like it. Its different to see harrys parents alive and that harry has a sister. very good. Cant wait to see what happens next!

This is a really good story so far. I can't wait till you post more.

This was very weird. I thought that faeries didn't exist in the world of Harry Potter.

very nice. details are important but its good that you didn't go over board,

im loving it so far hope it gets juicier tho, but it is still very good

good so far it's very nice, please update asap!!!!



~Hermione Jane Potter~

Try to get subject verb predicate agreement together. he -- him, she -- her.
her and Harry have --- she and Harry have...--- Ron, Hermione, and him have should be Ron, Hermione and he have been...don't let the plural verb throw you off. Picky I know, but old habits die hard.