NafXSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 08/06/05
I LOVE this ...
It's fantastic !!! *happy laugh*
Keep it coming ... lots more ... OFTEN !!!
*dreamy sigh* ... imagine warming your feet on
him ... snuggled up ... silk sheets ... *swallows* ... *fans self* ...
~Nat.
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very very good first chapter! awesome! cant wait to read more! |
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krystinaUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/05/05
I absolutely adore this story, and I've read through everything on your author's page. Please update! |
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Awesome story, its almost exactly how i picture them as older with jobs and such. Keep up the good work! |
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Sigh. Love it. Was going to say "update soon" but seeing the Author's Note above, I'm just going to say "hope you finish this story!" |
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spartacusSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 07/03/05
I like the story, although I think I would have fancied a slower progression between H & Hr. I mean, they've been best friends for 7 years and surely had to have been in comprising or close positions before - but nothing happened or was apparently felt. But I was repulsed by the whole Hr/ZS - especially to the point of shagging! And her thinking of that 6th year had no mention of Harry, interestingly enough. I am curious to see what is up with Ron & Pavarti; I hope it's more than simply she was the one Ron slept with. |
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Cute cute cute! I love seeing both of them struggle. You've done such a wonderful job! |
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Ooohhh...we're definitely getting there!!!  Their lovely little banter that almost turned into a make-out session if not for Ron, was cute! |
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AnuUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 07/03/05
lol so Harry realizes he likes Hermione eh? i can barely wait for your next update i've been waiting for this update forever! |
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Seven million years?? How can I wait that long? Well, real life does put fanfics into the back seat, so take the time you need. *sigh*
I must say, you've got a great story going here. I am loving the sexual tension. It works so well between them. And you've got me so curious what's going through Ron's mind and his and Parvati's big secrets. So, please update as soon as life comfortably allows! |
Author Feedback: Yup. Seven million years.
Life sucks, doesn't it?
~Belle
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KatakaliSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 07/03/05
Okay, enough with the cruel teasing already!!!
Something has got to happen next chapter between this two, and I mean something that leaves them completely frightened and more aroused than ever. Think ou could manage?.
I think you can do more that that, you are a wonderful writter, I love this story more and more, keep it hot and lovely!!!
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KenSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 07/03/05
Great chapter, the UST is certainly written very well, I enjoyed reading it a lot. Hope you won't be gone for too long, though I understand that RL should comes first. |
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Well...I can only say that I'd better book my cryogenic stasis chamber so I can be flash frozen in order to survive the wait until the next chapter.
The sexual tension was wonderfully thick...esp the house elf scene in the kitchen. |
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What! After building all that wonderful sexual tension, you're just going to leave it here?!
Though, I guess what comes to pass is fairly obvious and its probably a good thing that Hermione didn't do her room as she probably won't be needing it. hehehehe |
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Oh, you just have to update soon! You can't leave us hanging for long. This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. I can't wait to find out what they do next. Why was Ron telling Parivati(sorry for the spelling)to be careful? What are they up to? Please update soon. Love your storyline and where this is going. Lady Chancellor |
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