YAY!!! **claps insanely** This story was SO wonderful!! Such sweet and fluffy H/Hr goodness...I must have a dozen cavaties now! Sigh... I just loved the way Harry was "talking" to his parents. Very nice touch. Thanks for sharing!! This is going straight to my fave stories list!! Cheers!!

Overall this was very good. I enjoyed it a lot. Interesting decision to structure it as Harry's and Hermione's journal entries. This worked pretty well until the evening of the Valentine's Ball; what I mean is, going back and forth between their two "journals" during that evening made the action flow chronologically, but if you pulled Hermione's sections away from Harry's, each journal would seem very disjointed. I did find one glaring typo, right at the top; if this story is set in 7th year, it should take place in February 1998. At any rate, it's a very enjoyable story.

OMG!!! This was a very nice one!!! Is it done? It didn't say though...I loved it!!!

OMG!!! This was a very nice one!!! Is it done? It didn't say though...I loved it!!!

Oh, I love it! It's very well written, and completely cute! I like how you used the diary entries to switch between Harry and Hermione's PoV ... very clever.

"She gave me that secret smile only girls are meant to understand, as it never really crosses boy’s minds that we are just as perverted as they are, only that we are much better at controlling it and keeping it hidden behind coy behaviors."

LOL! That is so true and very well put.

Anyway, the point is that your story is excellent!

~*~Amie~*~