AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/12/07
great story I would love to see you write a long one
thanks
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I can't believe I've never read this one before!
It's great, wonderful, fabulous! A little confusing sometimes when you switch point of views but otherwise I absolutely loved it. You're a wonderful writer and I've enjoyed all of your stories that I've read so far. I hope you will keep writing and improving where need be, though I certainly can't think of where improvement is waranted.
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skyaceSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/12/05
Ooooh nice ending  The diary style was different (but different is good  ). I guess that means you have to leave out the narrator descriptions though  Ah well. |
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SabineSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/12/05
I feel like I've started every single one of my reviews of your stories the same--with an 'Oh, wow', but I can't help it, it's just the most natural thing that comes to mind. Your stories are simply gorgeous, especially this one, and it just wipes all knowledge of language out of my mind, it seems.
Again, your loyal fan, Sabine |
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KatieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/07/05
wow. I LOVED this story. I can't exactly find words to express it, but just know that I rarely ever leave reviews and I thought I should let you know how much I enjoyed this. I'm also pretty picky about the H/Hr I read, but... this was awesome. |
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BazzaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/05/05
Cute story. Really cute. And the last line was really good in that position. I really like the diary entries (especially the ball with the two people and everything) and I love Dumbledore. Great stuff! |
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That was a cute fic. Dumbledore just knows everything doesn't he? I'm sure if the same thing happened in the books Dumbledore would still know all about it. Anyway, this is a great little fic and I'm glad you wrote it.
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MysticSamSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/04/05
My mind has a mind of its own, a separate entity from myself. And this entity has unanimously decided that its in love with Harry Potter and thinks he is very good looking.
I think it has good taste.
I love this quote. It's so...Hermione-ish. Is this another one-shot? Cuz It seems pretty complete to me, but the status says its still 'in progress'. Ah well. If you continue it, I'll look forward to wherever you go with it... |
Author Feedback: Indeed it is complete. Thank you for telling me that I had it up as 'In Progress,' how stupid of me...
I'm glad you liked it though.
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Wow Wow Wow! That was so amazing I almost cried! It was so nice! Wow... Fair dues to you girl! I'm off to read some more of yours now! Oh i just realised I've read them! I loved He's so contagious! These are really nice without being sickening as so many are! And without involving an unnessesary and unexplained trip to America...
Write more soon! |
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JoogieSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/02/05
That's delightful. The way you switched between Hermione and Harry's thoughts was slick and insightful, and I really liked the idea of Harry writing to his parents.
And I can just see Dumbledore threatening Harry with a Valentine's Day Ball if he didn't disarm by a completely random number. Perfect. And the "I really dislike Dumbledore" after he'd been warned about hate was positively side-splitting.
Wonderful job. I look forward to your next work.
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ahhhhh  so sweate and romantic and ohhh so nice and even funny in some parts i really really enjoyed reading this fic its really nice nad i loved that te trio is still up and who you put everything in a perfect sences, and well wow but the only thing is that you nerver said who ginn was going with? i know that maybey that would barake the plot you had in mind but just who did ginn went with?? i loved that teh were so dense that they didn´t knw the were in love cause it hapens awww so so lovely your fic  these fic really really rocks |
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Another wonderful story, I liked the back and forth between journal entries.
I thought that it was horrible that Ron had read all of Hermione's journals, though not overly surprising.
Harry's way of asking Hermione was sweet, especially with the reaction that Malfoy had.
So Dumbledore and Gandalf hit it off, no surprise, I imagine that they would get along well.
I really wish that you would break your stories into chapters, it would make them easier to read as one does not always have time to finish in one sitting. |
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Oh my gosh. I loved it.
Wowie zowie. I like how you used journal entires for the entire story. I'm speechless. I can't put into words how amazing this story was. I think my favourite line is "Dumbeldore sounds like a bloody fortune cookie". That and when Harry tells Hermione she's beautiful. I swooned....Awesome job (in my opinion at least).
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This is good. I like how you wrote it with both points of view. I also liked how you used so much of their thoughts, it made it much more interesting and real. props to you. |
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That is really good. I love that story. Took me a while to read it since I started reading in school then had to wait to get home to finish but I managed and it was worth it. I'm going to keep reading your stories. I've read every other one so far. Hopefully you'll write a new one soon. |
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