OMG! That was soo sweeet. I lvoed it
that was cute when they talk about babies. Poor mrs. weasly though .

Definately cute. Poor harry . Valentine's day is a horrible and ackward day if your a teen and have no one. I loved that Luna went with ron I like ron with everyone but hermione because she belings to Harry. soory done ranting. I hpe they love valentines day soon!!

Okay, so I jumped the gun and didn't read chapter two - but, i would still like more!!

Cute and fluffy, but I think it needs more NC17 content as advertised. Dunno, just my opinion. Add another chapter, pretty please?

Cute and fluffy, but I think it needs more NC17 content as advertised. Dunno, just my opinion. Add another chapter, pretty please?

This is awesome! Harry and Hermione's lovemaking was romantic and sweet. And both talking about their future and children...

Fantastic work!

Nice and easy...
Nice fic a bit short, but hey!
Wo can complain when it is good enough to eat

What a sweet idea, Hermionie wanting a kid for evyer year she knew him and was too stupid to be with him, creative

Awesome. You're such a great author- I love all your work, and this one is one of my favorites.

hey that was a bit weird but alright making luna's breasts bigger scary

well....yeah...so much for writing a one shot or a pg for once....firstly,you always end with a cliffy.you make a great novel writer. i guess this is partly the reason why your beta keep asking for 2shots instead of one.2ndly, you could make the story more fluffy instead of smut all the time.i dunno, more snuggling or something.up to you really.doesnt always have to end with smut. 3rdly.you like to write smut and your good at it.maybe you should try something new. (as long as its not those angsty uber sad character death stories. watever.i still hate angsty stories.depends on the mood though.sometimes if i want to wallow in self-pity...well,it works for some people...im not crazyyer know lastly,you got talent but dun let that get to your head.theres always better. no offence though

That was absolutely wonderful.I love sweet caring Harry. I loved their cute banter.
Exellent work.

~Rach

I've got majour cavities..That was so sweet, off to read the next part...

~Rach

Heh, that was a nice little fic. Luna is certainly an interesting character.

Sometimes, when i read velentine's story i think about the daughter of a friend... she's born on valentine's day. She will be in heaven or in pue hell on that day! (maybe not for some years, she's only four now!)
For the dentist level fluffiness... their national association may not approve, but is is not so bad :-).
Thank you, bye