H_HrFanSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/02/05
This was way too cute! A perfect little Valentine's Day story! Thanks for sharing it and thanks to your friend for giving you the idea for it!!!! BRAVO!!! 
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how sweet, Hermy remembering the past, glad she became Mrs Potter  |
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LucyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/02/05
Cute, fluffy and funny  What more could I want from a story |
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Aww...lol...that was cute and funny. Somehow I can totally see them hooking up like that. Great fic! |
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Ah, very nice! Nice and relaxing, almost. Or maybe that's just me reading this at midnight while half-awake. Meh. Anyway, good fic. |
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That was silly and ridiculous, but in a good way. I liked the flashback style, as it added a bit more depth than simply a little snogging story. |
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Awwww, very cute and fluffylicious. Thanks for the über coolio Valentine's Day fic.  |
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JanieBSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/02/05
Very cute! I see what you mean about the title; "Snogging Buddies" doesn't have the same ring, does it? The only thing was a little confusion between the past and present - some of those little lines of interesting shapes to separate them would've been good. However, I did manage okay since I'm not a total moron!  Anyway, lovely Valentine's Day fic - hope you had/have a good one!
xxxx Lady Jane xxxx  |
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ShalizaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/02/05
Awww...very cute! Thanks so much for writing and sharing.
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sweet story. i like it. i like the last line the best. "And I am so glad that term came to be, wherever in the English language it came from. For if it had not, I just might not have become Mrs. Hermione Potter." the story was cute. keep up the good work. when u coming up with another one of these?
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ok, this story was a little far fetched do you really think that they wouldnt act a little awkward. but thats just me i mean come on no offense |
Author Feedback: Yea, I forgot to mention it was OOC....but it is....cuz, I know exactly what it's like to be in that position. My best friend Jake and I kinda went through the same thing and it was super-awkward. I'm not all that good at writing awkward scenes, so sometimes I forget to write them.... 
Anyways, I was debating with myself whether or not to post this.....do you think I should delete the story? A lot of my stories have recently been suffering because I've been really stressed and stuff....*goes into very boring life-story explanation*
anyways, thanks for being honest.
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