I am loving your story so far. It's wonderful! When are you planning to update? It's been a few months from when you last updated.

I really love (literally) this story. I check it all the time..wondering if it was updated. It's got such a nice plot and really puts you on the edge of wondering what's going to happen next. Please update it. If you can't now please do it soon. I'm not impatient but I read this story when it first came out( Februaru 13) And again I LOVE it.
Your a very discriptive author. So I'm Reviewing to tell you how Fantastic your story is and Wondering if you may update it soon. thanx so much.
-CM

interesting...I'll be reading to see where you go with things here

great chapter! I it. Catcy beginning I must say. Hurry up and continue aldready!

Oohh.. I like it. You write well, you know? I hope to see more on it... Great job!

awesome ...
i was just browsing and stumbled upon this
please continue with this fic
-christina

Oh my gosh! that was awesome! I think they title C should be capalized in Captivated. I love this story! This is going to be awesome story, I can tell! Cant wait for the next update! Keep writting and updating at Portkey! ~Kelsey~

You didn't give a lot of infortmation and the chapter was really short. It was kind of weird and I'm not sure I like it.

Interesting. I like it. Odd, yes. But odd is good. please update soon

Hmmm...interesting...very interesting, indeed. A bit of a different take on how Lily and James got together, isn't it?

Liked the cliffy at the end of the chapter - I'm curious to see how this turns out....

Keep it up!

Yay, I'm one of you're first reviewers! Great job, I absolutely love the cliff hanger. Keep up the excellent work!