Nice... I like where this is leading too...I really like it but please just dont make Hermione too desperate in front of Harry!!!
POOR Hermy!!!!!! I hope next time Hermione will be in er...better condition..I dont blame her... the love in her life was taken away from her!!! N E WAYZ...WRITE MORE SOON!!!
PLZ.......

the best purely the best did I mention it was the best

Woo, me likey. This story is very well written. I hope you update soon, I want to see where Hermione goes, what she does and why the bloody hell Harry's gone off and married someone else!

really really really really reaklly REALLY SUCKED COMPARED 2 LAST CHAPTER

great chapter! nice grammar! I felt like i was Hermione. definite tearjerker

It's great so far, but isn't Hermione a little out of character? Oh well--continue with your story, it's going great!

Well this is really well written. I don't see any gramatically wrong or anything. This is really intense. I know that this is Portkey and it has to be hhr eventually but having Hermione interupt Harry's honeymoon would be a very low thing for Hermione to do. But of course Harry has to wake up some time I guess. Truthfully with this story Hermione needs to get over Harry and live somewhere else. Stay away from him for her own good and everybody elses. I know that seems mean but in real life breaking up a marriage is about the lowest thing you can do. I personnally think. I don't care how much they love each other or not. Well it will be interesting to see how this all pans out. Keep up the good work. I wonder if Rome is where Hermione will go to.

i like this. it's refreshing to see a harry-married-not-hermione-married story. usually it's hermione that's goes off after the end of riddle and finds some superficial love...or hermione shacks up with ron while subconsciously carrying a torch for harry.

i haven't read too many of the opposite. you've crafted it very well...with a lot of leeway for harry's reasons and his inability to have seen hermione's devotion. i'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I really like this story! I can't wait until Anne is out of the picture though, haha. Keep up the great work and update soon. Please

I'm sure I've already replied to it but I have to again it's Fantabulous it's pure and alive. I almost want to kill anne now. poor mione she's in love with Harry who loves anne That totally sucks wicked hardcore man okay bye.

what happens now? please do not tell me that it will stay like this...DAFT HARRY!!! DAFTDAFTDAFTDAFTDAFT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how could anyone be more daft and stupid a prat than him? there could be no possible way to surpass his being a git! ever! please do finish this soon....and i mean SOON...thanx hope not to be a pressure...ciao!

hey that was really good! veri intense, and for once i didnt mind there not being dialouge, usually i find those a bit hard to read but this one was brilliantly written! hope you can continue!

so intense, It's so wonderful yet dark. I feel so sad for Herms it's almost torture for me to read but I'll read it any way of course. such great writing. never read anything quite as good since the Fait acompli and In between place continue please for me.

Wow. I really like this fic! Is it gonna end up as H/Hr? Its good either way....

Granger's Twin

OH!!!! Good job. I really like this one s far! I love how you have it in Hermione POV! Good Job!!! Keep up the Great work!!! Can't wait to read more!! way to go for your first fic!!