well, I liked it a lot, and the whole no name thing works. I happen to like the whole no name thing, I think it makes it more dramatic and mysterious, both features that I care a lot for. And you were right to have that little meanie moment. If they haven't read the books, they shouldn't be reading the fan fiction,lol.

aww i love the story.. i almost cried and i don't cry very much. I really like how he gained her trust despite her past experience

An A/N! Personally, I like to read the occasional story that doesn't mention names. It most definitely wasn't bothersome in this story.

Okay, so it was CoS...that came across very well, I think.

The story is still good, but if she feels this strongly even after 12 years and XX number of years with Draco by her side, then it will be interesting to read where they go from here. She has some serious things to work through...

Thanks.
H_HrFan

I must admit that I find this story a little confusing. I'm assuming that she's talking about Tom Riddle and the diary when she mentions what happened 12 years ago? Is she mad at Draco because he was late coming home? Is it the around the time that it first happened or the anniversary of when she was saved by Harry? Or, did something happen to upset her because they never really talk about anything.

I could maybe understand if he'd said the word 'trust' in the beginning and it stirred something in her, but she was already upset before he ever mentioned trust.

Don't get me wrong, the story is not bad...it's just that her change seems so sudden.

OH! I just noticed the next button. I'll go check out the rest and post again if it's clearer.

Thanks for the story. I'll be interested in reading more from you.

Take care.
H_HrFan

I liked it. The one moment of constuctive criticism I have is to either have someone read over the story before you post or to be a bit more careful about editing your stories. There are several common spelling errors that spell check wouldn't have caught. Which story is it that you've written that is longer than this one? Also, I feel for you in the not saying names bit. I do that a lot when I'm writing. I used a lot of "he" and "she" instead of proper names.