luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/04/06
aww,that was cute!! haha, they were all worrying about that ron had a crush on hermione but then actually he didn't, that was a cool idea!!! |
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Talion, this was really good. I found your Mistletoe challenge story and really liked it, so I looked for your other stories and found the previous part and this. Very nice work. |
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Awwwww! Very cute. So sorry, I may have already replied, but I have not seen a computer in like 2 weeks. Great job on the story, and so happy that Ron wasn't all pissy at the end!
Shayna |
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I definitely liked this one! I like this series, is there more in the making? Anyway, thanks for the fic, it was simply marvelous! |
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omg. omg omg omg! you do not know how much i loved that story! it was GREAT! it was just fairly predictable abt the Luna part, but hey its perfect just the same! |
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/05
nice, really nice... yeah, so nice that I want to read more....  too bad there ain't any... |
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Aww..! Amizing how alike Hermione and Luna really are..! A really sweet story, this AND revelation.. Good job..!  |
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sherylSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/05
that was a great sequel and i huge part of me believed it to be Luna who Ron liked and not Hermione, for which i'm glad to say the least. Keep it up!! take care |
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JanieBSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/05
Very satisfying sequel! I actually went and read Revelation again and thought to myself I'd read it before - I checked the reviews and sure enough, I had! But it was just as good the second time and then I had II to read! I can go to bed happy now - Harry and Hermione together are just sooooooooright! Well done!
xxxx Lady Jane xxxx  |
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modgeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/05
Very nice story, very tricky wording, I guessed it was Luna but then thought I was going to be wrong because we didn't find out if any one else from school was at the party, but then again ron may have owled her sometime during the day and you just didn't mention that part, any ways very good story |
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zemog3782Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/05
I really enjoyed the story, but I guessed who Ron was talking about after hearing is description. As you know, I was one of the ones that didn't like your other story,but I still read it. You really write great stories even if I wasn't fond of one of them. Keep up the great writing and I hope to see more of your stories. |
Author Feedback: All right. So maybe I didn't fool anybody with the whole Ron/Luna thing. When I originally planned out this story, I was going to make Ron jealous of Harry and Hermione's relationship. But I changed it because I'm not a big fan of jealous Ron.
And thanks for giving this story a chance. After reading the reviews of my last story, I knew that I would probably alienate many of my readers. I just hope people will see that story for what it was and not judge my other work based on it.
From now on, I'm only writing pure H/Hr stories! |
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AlorkinUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/05
A cute story. I'm not really sure Ron would react so well to the ida of Harry and Hermione together. You did it well, though. My thanks. Alorkin |
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hzh1370Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/05
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LMAO! That was really good! And I certainly wasn't expecting the end. lol The thought of it not being Hermione never even entered my mind! Great fic! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/05
I love it. I knew from the start that Ron was talking about Luna. Anyway the sequel is good. I just Harry and Hermione together. |
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