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Nice to end with how it began - I just wish that it had just a little more. Overall, this was an excellent story and I can't wait to read your other work. |
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The Ferret and the Weaselette - what a glorious pairing! I loved how you wrote this conversation and how insightful Ginny was! |
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Thank God! That Draco complication was making me so sad! Go Harry!! Sigh! |
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Why oh why is Draco complicating matters! It is thoroughly frustrating me! Anyway, the previous couple of chapters were good reads - it's just the plot is getting to me. I will keep on reading, though. |
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Ugh! How could Slytherin win? Anyway, nice to see Malfoy has changed, but I definitely don't like the connection between Draco & Hermione. |
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Two shorter chapters that could have been a tad longer, but that's just me. Nice confrontation with Ron, and even nicer conversation between Draco & Hermione. Makes me wonder where it is all going. Hopefully, Malfoy won't be a complication between H/Hr. Anyway, I will read on. |
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Yes, who would want a carrot top manwhore anyway? (Okay, maybe I would! j/k) Other than a few typos and grammatical errors, it was a great effort - loved how seamless the flashback. Can't wait to keep going! |
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q.thewsSigned | Chapter : 14 | Date : 15/10/06
I wonder how someone could read a story here on portket and doubt that the story will be (at the end) DM/HG ? (and sometimes this is the problem here, you know how things will end).
And for your story, well, i have only one remark: Ginny was intruduced quite suddently, you could have her hanging around sometimes, even only strolling the corridors (we must remember that there is a lot of people around Hogwarts...)
Ciao! |
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Sage ValeSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 11/12/05
Hmmm....I actually am positive that i have read this story, but i love it sooooo much, that i just reread it all!!!! Hehe...and when Hermione confessed her feelings...i was all 'no! yes! no! yes!' because h/hr is rockin, but d/hr is....forbidden. it's more forbidden than d/g, in my opinion!!!
GREAT STORY!!!!!
-- Sage |
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I LOVE HOW DID YOU DO IT THIS IS THE BEST! |
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I'm glad that I made you feel better when I reviewed! I love your work! Bye for now!
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