i know the perfect song for this chapter. Its called the warrior is a child by a filipino artist Gary Valenciano. It is soo perfect it has some of the phrases u wrote.  |
Author Feedback: Yes, I did mentioned that I lifted some lines from that song. 
I guess there's a lot of artists who have already covered that song - a favourite among Christians. I saw a poem that's quite similar to the song's lyrics but I'm not sure which came out first.
Anyways, thanks for taking the time to read my stuff; hope you enjoyed them.
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coolmanSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 16/01/06
Very cute fic. I liked the gradual manner in which they got together. The romantic scenes in the end were pretty good too. |
Author Feedback: Wow! I'm not expecting any more reviews for my stories, because - well, I've been pretty much dormant for months - they're quite old and pretty much deeply hidden beneath the new pieces done by great writers here at portkey. 
Anyways, thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. You may want to check out The Anvil (http://theanvilezine.com) - something for the H/Hr shippers.
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This is such a sweet story, I loved it so much! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much.
I'm not sure if I could continue this one, though; after reading the sixth book and all. 
But, hey! I got canon a bit right; Harry and Ginny dating. Harry said he's not coming back to Hogwarts on his seventh year, and this story him being a Headboy kind of contradicts it, doesn't it? But then again, he might change his mind.
I'll see what I can do to tweak this one a bit.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 05/07/05
KEEP IT GOING KEEP IT GOING KEEP IT GOING KEEP IT GOING |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 12/06/05
write more! you are an, interesting, author! you really should continue, or i may have to find a new series!**cackles madly** |
Author Feedback: I thought this story has been dropped into the oblivion 
Thank you for finding me as an 'interesting' author. *bows her head and goes a bit read*
I, actually, am planning to add some more in this story, but I just can't seem to find the time - RL is finally catching up on me. I even have one story sitting idly on my thumbdrive waiting to be updated, which I was hoping to post before the HBP release. I got one more month left, so I'm keeping my fingers crossed.
If you can't wait for my updates, by all means read other stuff . I'd recommend stories by Musca, The Fitchburg Finch (I'm helping her out in some of her stories), there are other authors who write far greater than I do.
But if you want fluff of a different kind, then wait for me.
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I love this story! It was beautiful and very enjoyable to read. I hope you write more in the future! |
Author Feedback: Thanks.
Yes, I am writing some more. I just got a bit side-tracked lately but I'm writing again. I actually finished one chapter last week and am already 1/3 through with the second one. Yey for me.
I hope you do watch out for it. It's fluffly as this story, I hope.
It really fills my heart with joy whenever a reader drops me line.
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Author Feedback: Realistic kiss... hmmm yes, I guess that's what it was.
Thanks for liking this story. |
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“I’ll accept that.” he he...very nice way to end it. I like Harry's description of her. She has done a lot for him, hasn't she? Lovely story! |
Author Feedback: I wonder in the books, when will Harry start to notice all the things Hermione had done for him... only then can he see there's something more to her than being a friend... |
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"You were cheating on me.” That line had me laughing for quite a while. This was an entertaining chapter. I like Hermione's idea of docking house points from...well... anyone and everyone, ha ha. Very nice. |
Author Feedback: This is my take on trying to be funny. And I guess, this will be the end of it, but thanks for finding it nice. |
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How refreshing! This is the first story I've ever read where Harry doesn't tell Hermione off to make her run away even though he loves her he breaks her heart so she wont get hurt and blah blah blah blah blah. I love the fact that he actually asks for her help. It's very real, and very new. |
Author Feedback: I wanted to make that character change for Harry, asking really for help. |
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Hi there! I suppose I should be off fixing my typos but I was curious and decided to check out some of your work instead. I like this story so far and I think you're building up good chemistry between Harry and Hermione. She is a worry wort, isn't she? |
Author Feedback: Thanks for finding the time to look at what I have written. They're no where near as to what you have written no far. I'm pretty sure of that.
Hermione, that's what she is and I think, it's never gonna end until, of course, Voldermort is out of the way.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 01/05/05
Oh do write more about the 'detention nights'. I'd like to know what would they do during the detention...hehehe... |
Author Feedback: Oh ho ho ho! 'the detention nights'... the one that's for three nights straight? I'm not sure...  Hermione said it ain't gonna happen soon... but maybe... I'll just surprise you.
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Author Feedback: Oh thank you! A lot of encouragement doesn't hurt.
Nice to know that it brightened up your day.
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 27/04/05
excellent story! very sweet and ron in the end, lol.. in the beginning i wanted to kick him. but he was good in the end, good job! |
Author Feedback: thanks for finding this excellent.
Ron is one lovable and funny guy with an acid tongue, but I'm pretty sure I wasn't able to capture him well.
Thanks anyway.
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Very nice and fluffy. Madam Puddifoot's was a surprise, but a nice one. I thought Hermione was a bit of a buzz-kill at the end there tho. |
Author Feedback: Fluffy goodness was the real reason for the latest chapter, after my angst-ridden Points of View.
The chapter Innuendo at Madam Puddifoots' was my shot of trying some humour, I guess I fell short.
Hermione, hot one second and cold the next, a bit of a tease, isn't she?
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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