Ah, gotta love Ron's "planning" and also his last line: "And I have a horrible feeling they’ll forget my leftovers, too." LOL.
I seem to be clicking on your old stories a lot O.o. Some nice fluff to get brain cavities on  .
Maybe I should go reread Day by Day and Four Weddings now... *ponders* |
Author Feedback: I have phases where I click on my old stories, too...  LOL The brain thrives on sweetness you know. You re-read Day by Day and Four Weddings while I re-read Sorcerers' Nook... 
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Hi Janie,
Sorry I didn't review until the last chapter, but this was such a cute story. Where else can Ron organize something without actually organizing anything? Absolute brilliance! I do see that your style has changed a bit between this story & Sorcerers Nook -- I guess you used to go by "Lady Jane"? Anyways, great story -- very sweet & fun to read! |
Author Feedback: Hi again!
Oh, will I forgive you for not reviewing all three chapters? Let me just have a think about that...okay, yeah!  Good grief! "Lady Jane" seems so long ago! Actually, I was intending to register here at PK as "Lady Jane" mainly because that's what I registered at Fiction Alley as but I didn't get it right and ended up being myself instead which I think now is a good thing! And how interesting - my style has changed has it? I feel (hopefully!) that I get a little better with each story and if I go back and read an "old" story some time later it feels like someone else wrote it...okay, this is in danger of turning into another one-shot! Anyways, glad you enjoyed it as always!
Janie |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/07/07
Definitely accomplishing it's duty, the fluffiness left me with a smile at the end. Very well done! |
Author Feedback: Thank you - glad you enjoyed this! I really enjoyed writing it actually - fluff is definitely fun!
Thanks for taking the time to review!
Cheers,
JanieB |
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Yay! Poor Ron, he'll never see his beloved food again. A great job on all of this. I've always been a fan of work, hope to see more of you soon! |
Author Feedback: I hope you see more of my work soon, too! Seriously, I'm working on a story at the moment - but I've learnt a big lesson - I like to be almost finished before I start posting so it won't be up in the next couple of weeks...
Anyways, thanks so much for taking the time to review - glad you enjoyed it!
Cheers!
JanieB |
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ValancySigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 08/09/06
This was sweet and fun and lovely... everything brain candy should be!  I like your Ron, too. So many times the poor guy gets so abused in H/Hr stories. It's nice to see him happy and clever! (Well, doing nothing CAN be clever, as you've shown us! ) I've still got six stories of yours to read through. Yay! (ps - I also thought it was great you pulled someone out of the Lexicon. That's one of my favorite places to poke around. I double checked correct spellings for spells for my story on there.) |
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Completely wonderful! What a sweet birthday present from Harry and a nice intimate (*wink*) party from Ron. The beginning of this chapter was so adorable. I was so glad they weren't spouting "I love you"s already. This was fluffier than a batch of cotton candy! Fun and airy, perfect summer reading! |
Author Feedback: Hi there! I just had to reply and say thank you so much for reviewing - and each chapter at that - wonderful!! I'm so glad you enjoyed this - I always love to hear that. I really enjoyed writing it too - I always get caught up in my stories as I write them. Anyways, just wanted to say thank you - I really appreciate it!
Cheers!
JanieB |
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Aww, adorable! I was laughing through most of it and then I got to the end and just had to sigh. Incredibly sweet and fluffy. Just what I needed! |
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Heehee, oh, Harry and his hormones! Ron's thoughts were hilarious and this whole story seems very fun. Is Hermione knowingly teasing our poor hero? One can only hope! Everyone is lovely and in character (and acting like 16 year olds with lots of "fun" hormones). More to read! Great story! |
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I think that we have the same taste in stories...a love for fluffiness. It is so refreshing to read so many stories that are just what I am looking for and that have all my favorite elements rolled into one...and with nice original plots! Great job...as usual.
Michelle |
Author Feedback: Hi Michelle,
Oh yes, I love fluffiness! Even if there's a touch of "un-fluffiness" occasionally, the ending HAS to be fluffy! And thanks for the lovely review! 
Janie |
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i'm not quite sure why, if Hermione knew how Harry felt, did she not know who Harry was jealous of? why did she go through all of those emotions? she noticed how he looked at her. was it just self denial ans disbelief?
that was a cool Ron idea. although, I'd imagine that Hermione would have like to have her other friends there too. it's good that they took it so good naturedly. i was expecting him to surprise them in the common room when they came back from their alone time. then again, they wouldn't be able to take their time then.
fun story! thanks so much for writing! |
Author Feedback:
Hi there!
Thank YOU so much for reviewing - each chapter no less! (Yes I do know how hard it can be to stop and review before going on the next chapter so I doubly appreciate your reviews!)
You know, I had to look up that last chapter so I knew what you meant about Hermione not knowing who Harry was jealous of - it was fun to actually read that part again! You see, Hermione was so wrapped up in Harry as they were talking, she didn't even attempt to think about why Ron said Harry was jealous! But of course, it's not a comment a girl's going to forget so she simply asked Harry about it.
When you ask why did Hermione go through all those emotions I assume you mean the part where she ends up saying "It's me?", yes? Have you never had a conversation with your eyes? (Which really includes all your face - expressions as well as the look in your eyes). This one in my story is a rather long one - but it just seemed to fit in so well!
If I was Hermione and I had Harry to myself (dream on Janie!) I would definitely NOT want anyone else there! I think there would've been another party a day or say later in the common room when everyone would find out they were "together"!
OK, I've waffled enough! Thank you so much for your great reviews!
Cheers,
JanieB |
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great! he didn't have to screw it up with words. i love it! and she figured it out. she must have been pretty blind before. crazy. of course you had the end the chapter right there! do you know how hard it is to review when you can't wait to see what's next?
at least Ron has his head on straight. where did all of his wisdom come from? not that i mind, this seems to fit Ron pretty well, actually. |
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Hermione probably doesn't realize that she is flirting - but i guess there's no way that Harry will realize that.
i love the stark contrast you have developed between how Hermione treats Harry and how she treats Ron - and vice versa. there is no doubt (in my mind at least) what all of it means. but then again, i'm delusional...or something.
and, i'm glad that Ron doesn't seem to fancy Hermione. that will make things a little bit less complicated in the long run.
what a sweet idea, btw! i like it. |
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Awwww... what a sweat lovely story.
This was my brief interlude before heading of to read the sequal to day by day. And what a lovely interlude it was. Well done. Love the interactions. And loved Ron's "party" for her. LOL! Sometimes, Ron just has it right. I sure hope they remember his leftovers. |
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That was cute - great idea with the personal party...gotta love Ron sometimes. Another great story! Love it! |
Author Feedback: Me again. Saying thanks again! And really chuffed you enjoyed this! I really do have so much fun writing my little stories it's very gratifying getting positive feedback!
Cheers (again!)
Janie |
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aww yay! she knows...and since this is a fluffy story I know I have nothing to worry about...can't wait to read the rest - this is tooo cute! |
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