all that extra training and Harry *still* gets beaten. To be honest that's kind of pathetic lol. Wonder just how much harder Moody is push the guys now lol. well update soon would you. sheesh lol. later.

*sigh* i've been missing a lot HHr lately..i'm having a hard time catching up! great chapter! and now they've begun their work..can't wait for more action...and fluff of course..keep it up!

Hey! I love this story. Probably one of the best that I have been reading lately.

Interesting story.

I especially like the way you are portraying Hermione - with a mixture of desire for a relationship with Harry and the emotional trauma of losing her parents. This characterisation is excellent.

Thanks for writing it.

Great story and it's nice to see it's moving right along. I'm really enjoying it, although I would think someone puking right after being kissed by him might give Harry a bit of a complex. Regardless, I really like the story and I hope you update soon.

that was a great chapter. i can't wait for the next one

I thought this was a pretty good chapter...now I need to go back and read the rest...just started on this story and this chapter has me hooked in. Now I want the update really fast...please...kidding, I know, takes time to write things.

I loved it! Especially that training stuff they had to do. You were very imaginative (once again I hope it´s the right word, leo gave it to me). I´d love to have a treadmill like that Oh, and puleeeease write more stuff about Harry and Hermione... They are so cute together.

Your story does have interesting and valid points.

Hermione's flew to USA is a mark of originality. And "Alex" it is another interesting idea. It would have been funny if Ron had some sort of "little crush" towards Alex.

Harry and Hermione are interesting as characters and it is to nice to see the development of their relationship.

I like your Lupin!

I think you were able to catch some of the traits of the Weasley family. Well Done!

I hope that Neville and Ginny got together somewhere in the future because they are a Canon Couple. Draco and Ginny are not. And I only like Canon Couples, there is couples that might will happen in Canon.

Two little notes:
1) The death of Hermione's parents: I think that Hermione's grief should continue, at least for awhile. This is an event that leaves profound marks. From tears to denial and then to acceptance there is a long way to be cross.

2) Ron and Luna. Well... I think that this is the main weakness of your fic. Luna is an interesting character. The way she knew the truth about "Alex"; the way she kept with herself the truth about the Prophecy; the way she seems to support Harry. Everything in her is full of life and great feelings. I like your Luna!

Now here it comes the problem: At least so far, your Ronald Weasley seems to be a character only concern about food and almost nothing more. OK. He travelled with Harry to the USA and he continues to be loyal towards Harry. That is good. But it is not enough. The only moment where the reader can see a "different" and much more profound Ron it was during the "Ginny/Draco issue".

Now the reader must ask: what can possibly Luna sees in Ronald? The way you portraited Ronald Weasley, one must wonder about the future. I mean, the way things are right now, I don't see any bright future to Ronald and Luna. And I don't see a bright future, because sooner or later, Luna will understand that there are wizards with much more appeal than a "Ronald stomach Weasley".

Please, don't get angry with me. It is because I'm enjoying your fic that I am raising this question. There are more inside "Canon Ron" than an empty stomach.

Keep on with your Good Work!

Dome

I loved it!!!! YOu did great!!! I can't wait for your next chapter!!!!!! Keep up the greaat work!!!!!

that was a great chapter. i can't wait for the next one

Poor 'Mione..yep, the breakdown was long overdue. Can't have her bottling stuff up inside you know, she might end up bursting! Good thing Harry's been in the same situation before, so he can give the same advices that was given to him..
I like Luna and her peculiarity!
Keep it up, guys!

Well, in the long run it was good that Hermione broke down like she did, & it was good that Harry was there for her.

I still think that there was more to Malfoy's actions than simply wanting to get into Ginny's pants...he's a smart enough fella that he should know it was suicidal to try something in her parent's house while the entire family is assembled.

I'm willing to overlook the Lovegood's knowing the prophesy...they're part of the tin-foil hat crowd.

Another great chapter! I'm so glad Malfoy is out of the picture (at least for now). Neville is so much better suited for Hermione than ferret-boy!

Well done! I love this chapter! I´m looking forward to the training part Wohoo!
Poor ´Mione! It´s sad to see her like this. Crying and hexing the people she loves... It´s good that she got Harry now... Please don´t let HIM die, too