this is a really powerful piece and i hope you can continue writing it

I read a bit of this chapter, then skimmed the reviews of the others to get a feeling for the rest before I wasted my time, and it would've been a waste, especially after going back and reading the rest of the last chapter. "Growing feelings for Ron"? After she's admitted that she loves Harry? WTF is that all about? And even if she was confused about her feelings, Hermione has NEVER abandoned Harry when the school decided to turn on him. If anything seeing him ostracized is going to trigger her "Lioness with one cub" mindset faster than anything else.

Rewrite it or pull it, because IMNSHO this doesn't belong on portkey.

Are you going to finish it? If don't please put under *abandoned*. > >


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Have you ever meet someone who was in the greiving process? It certianly isn't like that.I don't get it when authers do this... look I'm not trying to insult you or anything, it's just Harry had know him for like two years and talked to him spareingly, so Harry would feel grief, but not that strong. It's more like a horrible disapointment for him to die, not a life wrenching, horribly mortifling event. I like the way you write, but that chapter was waaaayyyy over the top and not at all believable.

I love the story All in all a very good story the only thing about it is that there was no more to read after the last chapter I do hope you will continue it with more chapters very soon... Please keep up the awesome work. I really looking forward to reading more of your story. I also wanted to thank you for all the time you have put in to this story and I hope you will have a very nice day.

Talia

I love the story All in all a very good story the only thing about it is that there was no more to read after the last chapter I do hope you will continue it with more chapters very soon... Please keep up the awesome work. I really am looking forward to reading more of your story. I also wanted to thank you for all the time you have put in to this story and I hope you will have a very nice day.

Talia

I love the story. You have made me cry when the charaters cried I felt their pain when they felt no one loved them. All in all a very good story the only thing about it is that there was more to read after the last chapter I hope you will continue it with more chapters very soon... Please keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more of your story. Thank you for all the time you have put in to the story and I hope you will have a nice day.

Talia

I love the story I hope you will continue it with more chapters very soon... Please keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more of this story. Thank you for all the time you have put in to the story and I hope you will have a nice day.

Talia

Awsome chapter i feel totally sorry for harry though.....i was thinking of making a story kinda like this but i don't know if i will

i have had enough i tried to endure because you had a marvelous plot but this is too much. A drunk Hermione, seriously? This is out of hand

i liked this chapter better than the others. i have no clue why i didnt like the other chapters. i continue to read becuz i am mystified by the plot this chapter. oh i dint like the part where vernon beats harry in his sleep. it sounded too much like rape

i dont know what to think. but i know that harry is one bing whiner. i dont want to read on but i must because i am intrigued. your writing style has captivated me so i must continue, on with the fic

how sad...i hope you update soon...u got me hooked

i hope you update this story soon, i kno my friends and i did enjoy it the first time we read it, we're really hoping you'll try and get something else out.

the story is really good. I hope she does go back to harry. Maybe she'll realize that they belong together. Good job..Keep up the good work!