okay im the anonymous below and i just read the author's note about her eyes. in almost every fan fiction it does say brown. and most its the doe brown eyes like you said. i dont know where people are getting blue from, maybe getting it mixed up with bonnie from the movie, although i never saw her eyes. but even hp lexicon and the books describe her as having brown eyes! where in the world did blue come from?
again i loved this story.

haha i loved it.
the voices were great and i love it at the end with the "Ah, young love. And even though the line would normally be 'too bad it won't last'" haha thats great. really is a wonderful story i love the thought of him having like a mental war about it. and its true, he never got love from his family.

okay, this chapter wasn't that bad, but i really disliked the first chapter because it was really confusing, since draco kept changing his train of thought and you kept inputting your own 'oh no, you'll be thinking this... but is draco going to do it?' stuff like that.

yeah thats all i kinda disliked, but other than that, i think its an okay fic.
(and dont worry, i'm not criticizing you, i'm just a really tough editor on stuff, so i try to help authors write more coherently)

Hi again. I finished reading this story an let me tell you that I really enjoyed it. You did a great job. I also looked some of your other stories and I liked them too. It would be great to see more of your fics soon as I think your stories are good. I saw lots of extremelly long fics and some of them usually made me feel bored as it seemed that the authors were only interested in writing more and more pages instead of a solid story, well not everyone do that, there are some great writer too. I think that your stories are good as you make them short but well defined.
Hope to see moore your fics here...

Hugs and have a nice day
Sabri

this fic was nice and short. it was really good i thought. cant wait to see your other stories!

okay, speed it up! i'm getting way to anxious. since we all know the girl is ginny, i would like to say something. every draco and ginny fanfic i have ever read included this mistake and it is so annoying, the first time i saw it i thought it was a typo! but no, GINNY HAS BLUE EYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why can't anybody get that right. i'm sorry, i'm not yelling at you (exactly) i'm yelling at people who make the mistake! but o well, hurry up the story and pick up the pace! blac blac blacb labcla f

wow! i'm madhu893 and this story is so good! but you don't belong in fanfiction! you are a great poet i love your metaphors and similies especially the marble one! and did you make up the italicized stuff, because that is good too! you really should consider poetry or sumthing, this is so cool, i must read on!

I do like how you're unfurling the story through his thoughts as he travels to meet this mystery girl. A very nice narrative style b/c it follows a different path then the conventional linear time flow. Very nice.

Beautiful descriptions...I love how you have stretched our curiousity throughout the passage so we must know what has she done...and of course the next inevitable question (though most can guess) who is she? Fantastic descriptions of Draco and his thought processes. I can't wait to read the next part.

Not too bad. I love Josh Groban and I'm glad you used one of his songs in your fic, you probably should have mentioned it though for people who don't know the song . Nicely written though, it was interesting to read Draco's conflicting emotions. It'd be cool if you wrote more to this, like Ginny's reaction to him leaving her after she said that and everything. Keep up the good work!