aditivatsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/07/08
I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u |
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Good story, ut you don't seem to have noticed that Riddle's were muggles so they couuldn't have had an invisibility cloak. |
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ive said it to you before! lol! but i really like your stories! your great! i must say, this is another right brilliant story! |
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rasadamSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 16/02/07
I really tried to get this, but sorry... I think this plot was just doomed.
First, the fact that ONE death closed Hogwarts (Re: Chamber of Secrets), the whole a murdered student with students patrolling alone is ridiculous.
The theme of the story, especially its shortness has really no place for any H/Hr fluff, it was rotten in the scenario. Add to the fact that Hermoine was obviously in danger and nothing was done to protect her, sorry I think you were really off the ball with this one. |
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dhamon45Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 23/01/07
i'm sorry, but the murderer is obviously Malfoy... Mudblood... thinking about his master's orders. it all fits to easily reveal to the reader who the murderer is, also, i'm sure Draco can charm the pants off of anyone. |
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PepperoniSigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 07/12/06
Good story all over, Collin was a bit of shock, but very unperdictable and I liked it. Keep up the great work, Pepperoni |
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PepperoniSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 07/12/06
hehe, so it isn't Malfoy as I thought. But who in the name of Saint Nick could it be then....Ron? He wouldn't kill lavendar or call someone a mudblood... McLaggen.. He might be angry at Hermione for ditching him... Time will tell. Keep up the great work. Pepperoni |
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PepperoniSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 07/12/06
Great chapter once again. I am really curious who in the world can be the murderer. I doubt it is Malfoy, that would be too much of an cliche. Keep up the great work. Pepperoni |
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PepperoniSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 07/12/06
Cute, horrific and splendid all at the same time. I loved this chapter. It is still a cruel story, but hey, that's life huh... Yours, Pepperoni |
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PepperoniSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 07/12/06
You have one sick mind indeed, but a talent for writing too. As long it is pure fiction your wrting and aren't planning on doing what you write, I can't do more then congratulate you on your succes. Keep up the great work, Pepperoni |
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PepperoniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/12/06
The warning was in order. It is indeed suggestive chapter. I am curious what else you gave in store for us. Keep up the great story. Yours, Pepperoni |
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Wow! I have to say that the frist chapter had me nearly running to the bath room to throw up but by the end i was use to it. You did a brilliant job on it though and i liked it a lot. I couldn't belive it was Colin of all people, you had me convinced that it was Draco. I fully gasped and practicly screamed when i read the word Colin but thatw as a brilliant plot twist so well done and thank you for your time. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 10/08/06
ive reviewed before and i just want to say again great |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 10/08/06
wow really great intense story .. my heart rate is somewhere above .. idk normal  anyway great story and plot |
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Hmm, so then it seems as though it is definitely NOT Malfoy. HA. I so guessed it. I kind of hope I was wrong with my other guess. |
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