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Amazing, i really love the out come, and how the three of them love each other, albeit in different ways but when Hermione get this oppertunity, her boys are willing to pack up and go with her. The Trio must survive! And the idea that Ron and Harry planned this without telling her, and making it a surprise is wonderful, so very much like them. Wonderful story, it would be great if you could extend it to what happend in America! |
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good one i really like it is that the end? ar is there going to be more? well i hope there is more and i really like you other stories as well so write more!! |
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Awww! That was an awesome chapter, great job with both of them strugling with themselves, as you can tell harry is from how he speaks/etc. And a great way to express what they are feeling and what they want and such! Great work and thank ya for sharin! |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/01/05
Oh my! What a wonderful story...I love how Harry knew not to ask Hermione to give up her dreams but modified his. It was so sweet and happy! |
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LieSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/05
A very sweet and lovely story!
I hope you'll write more stuff like this!
Thanks for posting
 Lie |
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JanieBSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/05
Short, sweet, heartfelt, very nice, loving, Harry and Hermione - need I say more?
xxxx Lady Jane xxxx |
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This fic was simply and wonderfully perfect! Thanks for the fic! |
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awww!! yayyy!!! hehe, so cute. typical Hermione trying to follow her brain and not her heart. wish we all had a guy like Harry to chase after us like that. *tear* soo touching. also like your other story too. =D |
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I liked it. It was short and sweet and I'm so happy they get to be together without sacrificing their dreams. My only complaint is that there are some grammatical things. A spell check wouldn't get them, but maybe a beta reader would.
Ex.: Muggle college not "collage." "afraid that my voice would break" not "brake." Etc.
Still, though, a very cute story. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for pointing out my grammatical mistakes! I didn't see them since the spell check doesn't get them and I don't have a beta reader. Thanks for reading and reviewing this piece. |
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Aww that story was soo sweet!! i absolutley lvoed it! I hope you write more stories soon I love both of yours so far! |
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A very nice one-shot; it always bothers me a little when Hermione is the one to sacrifice her dreams just to make Harry happy. Having both her boys willing to uproot themselves and follow her across the Atlantic so she can pursue her goals is great. And how long is it, really? Four years, and then maybe back to Oxford? Hardly an eyeblink in a long life, so long as they're together. Good work! |
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DylanUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/01/05
Please don't stop there.
I want to know what happens on the plane.
I want to read about how happy they are in America.
You have to continue!!!! |
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LilLambSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/01/05
aww! i want this to be more than a one-shot! hehe. it was so good! excellent, in fact!  i was beyond happy when harry said he wanted to go with hermione! i was thinking that in my head, as i was reading it, and i was thrilled to see that you came up with that scenerio! great job! i look forward to reading more of your work! |
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sherylSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/01/05
That was a very nice fanfic. i really liked it. The status for it is in progress so you might want to change that. Overall, great story!! |
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