Oh I love when writers create an awesome d/g story which was what you did here. Very hot and sweet at the same time!

I jsut read this entire work and I know that in your author note, you didn't like the way it was going. I was thinking that it was a really funny story with some sexy scenes! I'm not sure if you are even writing fanfic - but you should definitely finish this story. (Maybe rename it - but you can't leave it like this - there is still so much potential craziness ahead! It's really good!

That was great, i love mom's with a sense of humor, except when it happened to me, she was just my girlfriends mom..... I spent all day checking my back, making sure i didn' get shanked by her dad.

IT'S BEEN ALMOST TWO YEARS WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO REPOST I LIKE THE FIC, AND I KNOW YOUR THE AUTHOR BUT I REALLY THINK IT'S GOOD

THAT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER FOR SOME REASON I THINK MY FINGERS ARE TRYING TO TELL ME IT'S TIME TO GO TO BED IT'A 2:09 AM AND IM UP READING NOT THE LONGEST EVER BUT IM GETTING TIRED

sad to hear this story is on a break... but i'm a fan of all your work, so i'll wait patiently for this one to start up again. happy writing!

wait...are you going to delete this whole story and then repost it? i really liked this so far!! i can't wait for the next one...i'll be patient! lol

well, whether you repost a whole new thing or whatever..i really like it!! can't wait to read more!

NO Woman dont stop writing this! Its a wee bit smutty but come on a year is enough to get back on track so get to it please

this might be your first try but it is better than some of the more experienced writers stories so far.

more soon please when is the wedding are you going to give them kids

The same thing I say to every author... If you don't finish your stories you'll loose credibility and less and less people each time are going to read the stories, unless they see them already completed.

When is soon because it seems to me that you haven't updated in a couple months... please update this soon i really like it...

ohh well i hope you update something soon. =) i wish you a haapy new year tho! its an awesome story so far!

Evil glares indeed. I do hope you find your way soon. I am rather curious to see where this will go.

For about two seconds I actually thought that 'Simply an Authors note' was a title! *Laughs* Gees. Well I hope you feel better about the story after you've fixed it up. I think it's pretty good. One suggestion when you're fixing it up though--maybe cut down on the 'loves' a bit. Like I said, just a suggestion. Anyhow I'll be looking for the updates! ~Aya